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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Funnymouth (01), Mar 6, 2013.
;A voice comes onto the intercom.; Breakfast will be served in fifteen minutes.;
Anni: -wakes Jenni up- Akiko, you sleep ok?
Akiko- ;Nods.;
Akiko- ;She seemed zoned out, staring blankly into the air.;
Anni: you sure? Jenni: -rubs eyes- who she?
Akiko- ;Sniffles and shrugs.;
Jack: -walks out of his room-
Akiko- ;Rubs her eyes.;
Anni: That's Akiko Jenni: -hops off bed and hugs Akiko- I jenni
Anni: Come on, breakfast will be served soon, Akiko wanna join us?
Akiko- ;Squirms, pushing Jenni off roughly.;
Jenni: -lands on her bum- I..I sowwy -runs behind Anni-
Akiko- s-sorry Jenni... ;She gently embraced the little girl.;
Ariel: She yawns, as she shuffles out her room, rubbing her eyes.
Akiko- Okay, Anni... I-is jack gonna b-be there?
Jack: -in the kitchen, digging through the fridge-
Anni: probably, don't worry lll make sure he's nice Jenni: it otay you scared
Akiko- ;Nods; He h-helped me once. Why's he so mean now?
Anni: because he doesn't want people to think he's nice (0.0 just realized I said bum not butt)
Akiko- Th-that doesn't make sense... ;She picked up Betsu.;