The Heartbreaker 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *--VHAYElicious_B10-- (01), Jul 5, 2012.

  1.  OH MY! WHAT KINDA OF STORY IS THIS? It's like a real world/fantasy story! Kind of like they have their own religion or something.

    It's amazing 

    Blump!
     
  2. Hoar!  Cupids are DEFO not adorable here.

    Well it's a real world yet they have a cult or something? :3
     
  3. Lol well when you described their appearance, it made them seem adorable
     
  4. Well yes their appearance... But, they are heartless to the heartbreakers. 

    My sister actually gave me this idea of the sisterhood and stuff, this was a book too. THE SECRET SISTERHOOD OF HEARTBREAKERS.
     
  5. "Let her go..." Cupid sighed.

    I smiled as I looked at him with awe. "What is your business with Sylvia?" I asked.

    He sat down across me and smirked, "Dream on, Heartbreaker. I can't tell you."

    I looked down and giggled evilly, "It's funny how," I looked at him slowly and glared, "I actually can read what your heart says." I smiled in a seductive way.

    One of his friend let me go and I sighed. "Thank you." I smiled ay the girl. She nodded and blushed. Tj ordered them to leave and they left.

    "You guys are no match for me..." I laughed.

    He slapped me but it didn't hurt, "SHUT UP!"

    A tear fell down my cheeks and I looked at him painfully. I wiped my tear and went near him slowly. "Tj, just because I don't have anymore tears in my system, doesn't mean I can't make you fall. Hard. For me."

    Our faces were only and inch further now and I placed my right hand on his chest where I could feel his beautiful heartbeat, and that moment I knew he was going to give in.

    My lips opened partly as our lips met. I sucked his energy like how it was in the video of Jar of Hearts. I felt good now. It felt so god damn good. But his tear will make me much more powerful.

    My tongue played in his, and I broke off the kiss.

    I giggled at him as I touched his lips. "I love you... Tj. I could quit the sisterhood for you. Be mine, please." I said with my soft seductive voice.

    He gasped as I looked at him with my still teary eyes, "W-what...?" he said.

    "I... Love you..." I said with a sad voice.

    "I do too... So much." Got you!

    I laughed in a sinister voice and shoved him, "Once a pledger of a Heartbreaker, never backs out. I'm sorry Tj. I don't love. Fuck love."

    Tears. Tears were coming out. I went near him and kissed him o the cheek, "Thank you for the tear." and I collected it by touching it.

    RULE NUMBER SEVENTY EIGHT: Never ever say 'I love you' to anyone with a full heart. Need only say if in need; not to be sincere.
     
  6. Awesome update! Bump!
     
  7. Bump!

    And lol, I know exactly who you're talking about.
     
  8. Like Philippines related stuff. Like Sy? I know their family. 
     
  9.  Oh my!

    Blump!
     
  10. It's my own word for bump. :3 There's a story behind it x)
     
  11. Andi, I'm not relating this to them  They're my friends. I just got this Sy somewhere else though :)

    Will be updating later 
     
  12. He was dumbfounded and I found my way out easily. I looked at him in awe. Why was I becoming more cold? I was never like this... But this new feeling, it's... It's definitely overwhelming.

    I wasn't near home, so I walked, it was fifteen blocks away. Well, I didn't have money! It was eight in the evening, I suppose. But I wasn't scared at all.

    There were a lot of heartbreakers here... Wow.

    I opened the door to our house and my mum stood there with a worried and angry look on her face, "Where have you been, Viktoria?"

    I smiled and hugged her, "Kidnapped by the Cupids. I'm fine, mother. Don't worry."

    Yes, my mum was a former Heartbreaker and she was pretty famous.

    She smiled and said, "Oh. Are you okay...?"

    I nodded as I went up the stairs to my room.

    I jumped on my bed, my head under my pillow. I could still feel the tight grip of his hands on my arm. But I felt power now. I felt rejuvenated.

    But... Guilt was crawling in my skin. I didn't want to leave him that way, but I had no choice. I had to...

    Remembering Sylvia from the London Clan gave me the chills. She was always competitive, she always challenged me. And I hated it. She was good at everything, except one... Making a guy fall in love without any magic/seductions.

    I admit I was such a failure when she challenged me, but making guys naturally be in love with me was just my thing.

    I closed my eyes and sighed. Cupids are such bastards. Sometimes they actually committ mistakes by letting a girl fall in love with a guy who isn't right for her.

    And that's where we come in, to fix their stupid mistakes. Make that person fall in love with us and break them for them to find the real ones.

    But as I think of it... Why is it always LOVE? So much bull****!
     
  13. Love the update! Love your story and love your style of writing!!!

    -Nightmare
     
  14. I  this
    Bump!