The Guy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *MyNameisShirley (01), Nov 2, 2011.

  1. the story is greattt!!!!
     
  2. keep on writing I really love it so far
     
  3. After school, I got a call. From Joe. He knows my cell?! Anyway, heres the conversation:
    Me: Hello?
    Joe: Hi
    Me: (shocked) Joe? How do you know my cell?
    Joe: Oh, Emily told me.
    Me: I am gonna kill her.
    Joe: (laugh) I just wanna say sorry
    Me: For what?
    Joe: For making Bridget tear your banner.
    Me: Who told you?
    Joe: Emily again.
    Me: I am soo gonna kill her.
    Joe: (laughs) Well, I just wanna say I feel bad. I gotta go, i have a football game. Bye.
    Me: Bye.

    Awww, isn't he soooooo sweet?
     
  4. I know I'm rushing, I was sorta busy
     
  5. Ok, let me do a re-do on the last part...

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    After school, I got a call. From Joe. I literally died from a heart attack. Joe. He was calling me ? I answered of course. This was out conversation:
    Me: Hello?
    Joe: Hi Shirley.
    Me: How do you know my cell?
    Joe: Oh, your friend um... Eliza?
    Me: Emily?
    Joe: Yeah! Emily gave me your number.
    Me: I am so gonna kill her.
    Joe: -laughs- Anyway, she told me about what Bridget did during Homebase.
    Me: She did? Oh, well, it's no biggy.
    (I was like blushing really bad then)
    Joe: No biggy? She ruined your banner... that was for your.... dog.
    Me: I'm fine with it.
    (Now I can feel my face burn. Who wouldn't if your crush found out you were making a stupid banner for a dog?
    Joe: Well, I just wanna say sorry. I feel like it's my fault since Bridget likes me. Ya know...
    Me: It's not your fault. She's a bully, as much as she likes you, it was my fault that I got near you for her to see.
    Joe: I think it was my fault...
    Me: No it isn't...
    Joe: Listen, I really wanna keep on talking, but I have a football game to go to. I'll see if I could call you later.
    Me: Ok, sure, bye.
    Joe: Bye.
    Awww, isn't he so sweet?
     
  6. Joe didn't call again, but I met him during first period. He said hi to me. My heart skipped a beat.
    "Today, we will be changing seats." Said Mrs. Borrego. "Table Number 1, we have Emily, MacKenzie, Jack and Luke."
     
  7. "Table Number 2, we have Melissa, Jenny, John P. and John W."

    "Table Number 3, we have Shirley, Joe,--"
    What?!!! Joe! He's gonna sit next to me! Ahhhh! Yay!

    "---And Bridget." said Mrs. Borrego.
    My moth dropped. No! No! I looked at Bridget. She was gonna sit across from me. I didn't care who's sitting where anymore. There I was, sitting between the cutest, sweetest boy, and the meanest, ugliest girl. She gave me a evil smile. I am gonna die...
     
  8. Wow ur a gud writer bump!!!
     
  9. Bump Hey I really wanna keep reading but Idk how to find your story can you post on my wall please
     
  10. Hmm... I am thinking...
     
  11. "It is such a pleasure to be sitting across from you!" said Bridget sweetly. Thats her. Pretending to be sweet in front of Joe. And Joe knows she's not sweet at all. As we sat down, Joe tapped me on the back. I looked at him. He rolled his eyes, indicating at Bridget. I smiled. Sometimes, he can be too sweet.