The Girl With Red Hair

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SnowLily (01), Jul 4, 2012.

  1. I turned around and what I saw defiantly look like a darker version of me. She has long straight black hair, very tan skin with no freckles, baggy dark clothes, pointed teeth and black lips that were curled up into a darker version of me.

    She must not have liked the light from the bathroom because she only stood so close that the light barely touched her bare, dirty toes.

    I must have been wide eyed and staring because she said "What? Haven't you ever seen evil before?"

    I must have shook my head no because she made a weird noice and said "Of course you haven't" withan eye roll.

    "Are you real? I asked. "Like legit flesh and blood?

    She walked over and grabbed one of my throwing knives and cut a big deep gash in her dirty hand and let it bleed into my already blood stained sink.

    "Is that real enough for you?" She asked, licking her cut causing it to close rapidly.

    In all of this I manage to say the stupidest thing ever. "You need a shower I said, walking over to my closet and grabbing one of my towels. "You aren't going to be with me if you're dirty. That's disgusting. And you won't be wearing those clothes either. You are staying in human for. My mind is off limits."

    "Ugh..." She sighed really dramatically. "Fine." Walked over and grabbed the town and I picked up all my stuff.

    I wrapped the knives up and grabbed my boots, jumpsuit, and leather jacket —that I hadn't noticed was hanging on the doorknob— and put them all in a box.

    "If you're not clean I'm going to hurt you," I said to Darker

    "Okay! Gosh," she huffed, slamming the door on me.

    I walked over to my dresser and pulled out some clothes that I don't wear anymore. Then I got a blanket and pillow and put it on the window seat. Shed be sleeping there.

    I laid on my bed and lookup at the ceiling that was high above my head.
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    I woke up and I could tell it was starting to get light out. Darker was sleeping but there was something different about her....

    I looked at my clock:
    5:46 am

    I looked at Darker again and then I saw what was different about her.

    Her hair was turning orange! She was turning pale! Her face had freckles on it!

    "HOLY CRAP!" I shouted and fell of my bed.
     
  2. BUMP! Update.Now.Pls
     
  3. Bump 
     
  4. And bump I shall
     
  5. WHAT'S HAPPENING TO DAKRER??
     
  6. "WHAT THE **** TESS!?!? Why are you yelling at almost six in the morning?!?" shouted Darker, waking up instantly.

    She's turning good! That's perfect!!

    "Sorry... I had a nightmare again." I mumbled getting back in bed.

    "Jeez. You should get that checked out. You wake me up everynight with those." Said Darker

    "Not my fault my mom died when I was five. Not my fault I was forced to kill the love of my life. NOTHING'S MY FAULT ANYMORE! it's all your's.." I shouted.

    "Well they were mean and they need payback. You let them all bully you for twelve years. God. Man up a little. I swear, you're such a ***** at times." Darker said turning over.

    Why did she look younger? She's growing smaller. And she looks grey...

    I must have fell back asleep because I woke up to the sound of someone coughing a liquid cough, like it was filled with blood or something.

    I listened some more and heard the cough again and again and then she whimpered in a very scared voice, "Oh god... No... Please not this."

    "Darker? What's wrong?" I asked going into the bathroom. "Oh my god! You're bleeding! And you're all skin and bones! What happened? You look like five year old me!!" I asked grabbing some rags from the closet.

    "I've been out of your mind for too long, Tess. I'm going to die!" She cried, falling to her knees and coughing up fresh blood.

    "Oh God... Hold on! Let me get help!" I said bending her a fresh rag and running out of the room.

    But I didn't even make it halfway down the hall before I puked my guts out.

    I ran back in only to find that blood was now spilling from her mouth, nose, eyes, and ears.

    "Tess!" she cried.

    I didn't know what I was supposed to do so I just picked her up— it was easy seeing how she was tiny now— and put her on the window seat.

    "it's going to be okay.." I lied.

    Surprisingly, I was upset. I loved her like a sister. And she's going to die.

    "****" was all I said.
     
  7. BUMPP!!! First!!! [/color{
     
  8. BUMP!! FIRST!! Boo yah!
     
  9.  Cant Wait To See What Happens Next !!!!
     
  10. Bump!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. "Tess...." She said in a weak voice.

    "Yes mummy?" I asked walking closer to the hospital bed.

    "I love... you... Don't... Ever.... Forget... That..." She said, barely get the words out before suffocating.

    "I won't mummy..." I sobbed.

    "Andy..." She said.

    "Yes, love, I'm here." Said my father, taking my mum's hand.

    "Take.... Care.... Of her..." she whimpered. "I love... You... Andy."
    **BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP** rang the monitor.

    She was gone...
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    "Tess..." she whimpered in a weak little whisper, trying to be strong, to be brave. I broke my heart.

    "I'm here, Darker," I cried.

    "You're crying..." she whispered. "Don't cry..." she said as she reached up and moved a strand of curling hair out of my face. Her hands were cold to the touch.

    "I can't help it..." I said, bending down and kissing her on the forehead.

    "Tess... Promise me one thing..." Darker gasped, trying to get air.

    "What? Anything?" I said, wiping blood from her face with a fresh rag.

    "Don't ever forget me...!" she sobbed before she turned her head and puked her life's blood onto the floor. "Don't leave me Tess...!!" she sobbed in between coughs.

    Horrible coughs that you could hear the bloody, liquid rattle in the back of her throat.

    "I won't... I couldn't." I promised her.

    Could I? No I couldn't.

    "Please come back to me when you're well!! And bring Joe with you. I have to explain what happened to him." I sobbed.

    "I will..." She said with her last breath.

    "Darker...!? Tess...! Please come back!! Please!!" I cried, wrapping my arms around her limp body and rocking her while my tears mixed with her blood.

    "Ple-ee-ee-ase!!" I sobbed...

    Please stop crying... I heard a whispered plead in my head.

    "I can't... I've let go to many times. I can't leave you!! I won't. I promised you I wouldn't leave!" I shouted, pulling her body closer.
     
  12. Omg I cried while writing this. 
     
  13. Bump its a pretty sad part to though
     
  14. Ikr. I seriously had to put my phone down cuz I was bawling. That's why it took so dang long. and thanks! I love new viewers!!