The Girl With Red Hair— Book two— Adulthood.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SnowLily (01), Jul 7, 2012.

  1. Love it! ᏌᏢᎠᎪᎢᏋ!!!
     
  2. Sorry it's short and FYI Tessa is 15 Kyle is 25 and he broke away from the family but would do anything for Tessa and his mother just not Joe, his dad.

    They got in a huge fight and Joe and Tess got divorced, Tess keeping the kids since Joe didn't care anymore. Tess will come back in later and so will Joe but not for awhile cuz the new update is bugging me. /:
     
  3. -—Kyle

    "Tessa! Tessa?!" I shouted, running through the double doors.

    "Kyle, help me!" Tessa screamed, her bloody hand reaching out to me before slipping into the darkness. I heard a door shut and I walked forward, trying not to trip.

    “God, the only time I don't have a flash light.” I thought, running into the cold metal door. I ran my hand down it until I found the doorknob and heard a agonizing scream from the other side.

    "Tessa!" I shouted, turning the knob and throwing the door open, but the room was empty. I walked forward, my footsteps echoing on the cement floor.

    "Tessa?" I called into the darkness, still walking on the now wet floor. I saw a light out of the corner of my eye and looked down at the wet floor.

    It was coated in a thick layer of crimson red that smelled very strongly of metal. "Tessa!" I cried, falling to my hands and knees in the blood.

    "Here I am!" I heard her say cheerfully. I turned around and saw her leaning against the wall, smiling and waving. "Tessa," I said, getting up but she turned her head.

    "No, I'm over here." She said with her hands on her hips. I walked over to her and she looked behind me.

    "No I'm over here!" said another Tessa.

    "No here!" "Here!" "Hey!" "Over here!" "Kyle!" "Oh, big brother!" "You fool! I'm over here!" and pretty soon there were about fifty Tessa's closing in on me.

    "Leave me alone!!" I shouted and they all disappeared. Then I heard another scream and ran into another room with blood coming out from under the door.

    "Tessa?!" I shouted and Tessa turned and looked at me, her eyes red. "Oh ****!!"
     
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  5. Nice! Bump!
     
  6. Cool!!!!:) loved it now bump lol
     
  7. Where can I find tge original? Around what page?
     
  8. I'll find it the comment so it'll be on the first page
     
  9.  BUMP Love It . 
     
  10. -—Darker

    Perfect. Everything is just perfect. Now if I could just get the eyes to a normal color I could get to Tess.

    "Get out of her! Now! I'll cut you out if I have to!" Kyle said, suddenly on top of me, holding a knife to my throat.

    I giggled and smacked one of my hands on the cement ground. "Kyle, Kyle, Kyle." I clucked my tongue, "After all these years you're still a fool. You can't "cut","—I put air quotes around the word cut—"Me out without killing your little sister."

    "You *****!" Kyle screamed and ran at me. I snapped my fingers and Kyle flew back to the wall now three feet in the air with the knife at his throat.

    "Hey now, watch your mouth. It's not polite to swear at your elders. Just let me bite you. One bite for power and you can live a normal life. How about that, hm?" I said walking closer to him.

    "Over my dead body," he said and spit at me, causing me to flare up so much that I left Tessa's body and threw it across the room. I put a hand forward and pushed on the air and looked at the knife make beautiful crimson red beads on his pale skin. "Tessa!" He cried, choking, kicking, and trying to pull the knife away, cutting his hands in the process.

    "That won't work!" I roared, angry that a mortal could be so strong. "I need you alive! I need your strength, I'll even let you live and be a servant when I'm ruler."

    "No!" He cried, like actually cried. "I won't let you! You can't do this! Just let Tessa go! Please!"

    Bingo. I snapped and Kyle fell go the floor sobbing and gasping for air. I walked over to Tessa and didn't hear a heartbeat so I walked back over to Kyle.

    "No! Darker no! You have to save her!" Kyle sobbed, crawling over to Tessa. I could feel my temper flare and I stomped on Kyle's leg and savored the blood curdling scream that Kyle let loose after hearing a satisfying crunching sound.

    "Enough of this bull ****," I said grabbing him under the arm and pulling him to his feet, causing him to groan in pain from his broken femur.

    "Stop right there, Darker," I heard a familiar voice say and I stopped dead in my tracks.
     
  11. Who's the person ?  Bump !
     
  12. BUMP LOL I HAVE TO KNOW
     
  13. You will. In time. I'm going to be writing alot today
     
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  15. Pm me who u guys think it is. 
     
  16. -—Darker

    "Kalona." I said, dropping Kyle's arm.

    "Stop this, now." Kalona said, his voice so strong. If I ever got a bite of him, oohhhhhhh. That would be heaven. I would be so powerful. I turned around to face him.

    "Now why would I do that when I have a world to rule?" I laughed. "Besides, it's too late. I already started it so I can't stop."

    "Yes you can. I demand you give the mortal her life back and release Kyle." Kalona said grabbing my neck and holding me against the wall, my feet nowhere near the ground.

    I laughed a wicked laugh. "Kalona, giving a life back is not that simple. Plus she didn't have anything in her future anyway." I lowered my head down so Kalona's hand was over my mouth. "Fine. I'll revive her under one condition."

    "What?" he said, his grip tightening. I inhaled his scent and grinned. "You'll see," I said and bit down as hard as I could on Kalona's hand.

    I felt myself getting stronger and Kalona moaned from pleasure he got from me draining him of blood. Odd, yes, I know. Ha, and I thought I was strong before. I looked at Kalona's face and saw the color quickly fading, his body growing colder and colder as he neared death. I never knew angles could die.

    "No! Stop! You're killing him!" Kyle sobbed from behind me. Kalona gave a little jerk and stopped moaning and I heard the sound of glass shattering. I looked at Kalona, to see why he jerked, and dropped his arm. He had no heartbeat and his eyes were pure white— his soul was torn.

    I got up and walked over to Tessa, I was going to do the difficult task of bringing her back to life. I bit Tessa on the wrist and blew. I blew some of my immortality into her. I coughed and sealed her wound and Tessa opened her eyes and immediately began coughing.

    Kyle mumbled something and then I heard him cry out Tessa's name and Tessa replied, "Kyle... Kyle, help me... The pain... The burning..."

    I got up and walked back over to Kyle. "No, Darker! No!" He started crying. I sighed an irritated sigh and grabbed him from under the arm and pulled him to his feet. Kyle wimpered and started to pass out from the pain but I pinched him to keep him up.

    "Kyle! No! Don't take him!" Tessa said as I started walking out of the room with Kyle. I barely even glanced over my shoulder but I knew she was coming at me.

    I let go of Kyle and snapped my fingers and he flew into the other room, hitting the wall with a thud and screaming a blood curdling, agonizing scream. Tessa screamed and I made the door shut and lock so she couldn't get to him.

    Then suddenly Tessa was on the floor—very twisted and uncomfortable looking—and I could only hear one heartbeat, Kyle's. I rolled Tessa over and flinched at the popping noices her joints made. She was cold, just like Kalona.

    I started panicking and I pulled her eyelids open.

    Pure white.