The Girl With Red Hair— Book two— Adulthood.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SnowLily (01), Jul 7, 2012.

  1. Hey I'm a new reader I just finished your 1st one and now this one. It's AMAZING
     
  2.  
     
  3. How many bumps do you need to update????
     
  4. -—Kyle

    "Hey boys." Mom said. "This is Tessa." she held the baby over to Dad and I sat on the cheap hospital couch.

    "Can I hold her dad?" I asked, holding my arms out.

    "Be careful." He said, handing over the baby.

    As soon as that baby was in my arms I had a vision, or something.:

    "Please... What do you want from me...!?" Tessa cried. She had chains around her and there were cuts everywhere.

    "You're soul." said a deep voice. It was female, I knew that. It sounded exactly like the monster that took me when I was three.

    "Never." Tessa said, whimpering.

    "Then you'll Die!!" screamed the the voice. As quick as a flash Tessa was dragged away screaming, leaving a fresh trail of blood, and I heard the sound of struggling and then choking, on blood maybe?

    "TESSA!" I screamed, coming out of the vision.


    "Kyle, what's wrong?" Dad asked, taking the baby.

    I ran over to the trash can and puked, my nose bleeding.

    "We need to get out of here. Now!" I said, running out of the room.

    -—Tess

    I looked wide eyed at Kyle as he shook. His nose was bleeding and he was mumbling.

    "Joe, take Tessa. Somethings wrong." I said.

    Then the next thing I knew was Kyle puking and running out the door screaming "We need to get out of here. Now!"

    Oh ****.
     
  5.  BUMP!!
     
  6. BUMPED NOW WRITE LOL
     
  7. Update!!!!!!!!
     
  8. FIFTEEN YEARS LATER [/color

    -—Tessa

    It was dark and cold, and I was scarred, but atleast mother and the family were safe.

    "Why don't you join me?" asked a deep voice.

    My lower lip trembled and I was forced to move forward another step, closer to the voice. "B-because I'm n-not afraid of y-you," I said, well more like whispered.

    "Puny human, you lie!" The voice roared. It must've been in my face now because I could smell it and it smelled horrible.

    "N-no, I don't." I said trying to be strong and to stand up straight.

    "You can't fool me!" it said and the next thing I knew was I was being dragged away by my ankles, clawing at the ground.

    "Kyle! Kyle, help me!!" I screamed for my brother. "Tessa! Tessa?!" I could hear him shout, bursting through the door.

    "Help me!" I screamed, reaching a hand out to him. But you can't be saved if your savior is late.
     
  9. *scared /).- fail