ㅡ Raven's POV ㅡ An electric shock wave sends to my mind, I stare at the four in horror. My vision becoming a blur and they disappear; and that's where it hit me. I'm not in the year 2012 anymoreㅡ I'm in the year 1960. ㅡ Rose's POV ㅡ A Xelock. It really does exist. I stare at Raven horrified at what I see. It's not her. I can feel her soulㅡ her BLACK SOUL. A devil is taking over her. Please Raven, fight it. But then, she disappears in thin air. Her face in fear as we last saw. "Raven...?" We say in unison. A tear drop from my eyes, "Raven!" I scream. My best friend... is gone. 1960 I stand up slowly as I observe what is around me. I'm in the middle of the dark forest. It is dark, very dark; the crickets singing in my ears as I hear the extreme silence of that night. It's lonely, too lonely in fact. And then I see a force, a barrier in the middle of the open field. I creep slowly into another tree, eyeing five ladies. "... IF YOU OPEN THAT BEATRICE, WE HATH TO KILL YOU." Her voice deep and threatening, yet seductive at the same time. Her position is like a model's. Full of poise and elegance. Her long dark red hair sways with the wind, her pale face glistens as the moonlight shines upon her heart shape face. Grandmother...? I say silently as I stare at her in horror. "Forces of the dark, forces of the evil, come to thee. I sacrifice thyself, take thy blood, take thy soul, take everything from thee." Grandmother's black hair all messy in a sexy way, her arms frontward but the elbows vended a bit. I see shadowsㅡ not their shadows. But the shadows of evil. The shadows that posses her. "... BEATRICE!" The four screams. The loud crack of the bones breaks my heart. She is turning... turning to a Xelock. I want to help so bad, I move trying to get out and go towards her, but the force is too strong. I look at her in horror, she stares at me. SHE SEES ME? I scream inside my head. Her mouth moves and says, "Go." I'm speechless, I couldn't move, she sees me. But how can that be? ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ Short comeback. I'm sorry. I didn't update for awhile 'cause I was recovering. Depression. Hope you enjoy.
No, honey. it's life in general. I'm going Inactive, and I'll be updating this when I come back... I hope. Bye bye, loves. x
I cover my ears, my eyes still affix on her. The smell of evil emanated around us. She grits her teeth looking at the four in a sinister glare. She was chanting something, yet what is it? I couldn't hear her properly. My legs wanting to run; clueless of my doing, I ran and ran out of the forest. Not looking back, I feel dark presence around me. "Go." A loud whisper screams in my mind. I almost trip as I ran swiftly with the wind. The sound of eerie made me weep. I feel chills down my bones, sending me creeps. I'm not near the exit of the forest, it's getting darker and scarier. My frightened eyes pierces with burning desire. Something is making me want to kill thingsㅡ no, someone is. I can feel the forces of nature coming as one, calling out my name. A cold touch on my skin, someone whispering, "Kill." calmly without rancour. I can hear the howling of a werewolf. I clench my fist as I turn back on my direction; I need to huntㅡ I need to kill. The colour of my eyes turned to black, I jump from tree to tree, feeling the force of Ipswitch on my side. I can sense that the werewolf's expecting me. I smirk as I watch from above. "Hello." I make it sound like I am beside him. He growls at everywhere in direction. He changes to his human form. "Where are you, witch?" I jump from the tree and down I go. My knee and right knuckle on the ground, my left arm on my hips. "Werewolf." I say as I lift my head up and look at him eye to eye. His eyes in horror, he utters, "I-Ipswitch?" "Yes." I say. And as I realise, an echo was there. I look at my back and am frightened at what I see. Eyes to eyes, the tense atmosphere around us. "Grandma..." ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ Very short. Enjoy. x
Incredible! Just finished reading and I love it! The way she's turning black with power reminds me a bit of Willow from buffy the vampire slayer. Very original and good grammar! Keep writing! BUMP!