Discussion in 'Fan Creations' started by PARZYVAL, Oct 9, 2019.

  1. Everyone loves the first day of school, right? New year, new classes, new friends. It's a day full of potential and hope, before all the dreary depressions of reality show up to ruin all the fun.I like the first day of school for a different reason, though. You see, I have a sort of power. When I look at people, I can...sense a sort of aura around them. A colored outline based on how long that person has to live. Most everyone I meet around my age is surrounded by a solid green hue, which means they have plenty of time left.A fair amount of them have a yellow-orangish tinge to their auras, which tends to mean a car crash or some other tragedy. Anything that takes people "before their time" as they say.The real fun is when the auras venture into the red end of the spectrum, though. Every now and again I'll see someone who's basically a walking stoplight. Those are the ones who get murdered or kill themselves. It's such a rush to see them and know their time is numbered.With that in mind, I always get to class very early so I can scout out my classmates' fates. The first kid who walked in was basically radiating red. I chuckled to myself. Too damn bad, bro. But as people kept walking in, they all had the same intense glow. I finally caught a glimpse of my rose-tinted reflection in the window, but I was too stunned to move. Our professor stepped in and locked the door, his aura a sickening shade of green.
  2. 😶 Woah.
  3. No :(
    Maddi_Matsu and Wednesday like this.
  4. is this mass shooting YA novel prologue?
    Nando and Muschi like this.
  5. Main character sounds like an asshat, I am okay with him dying. Good story
  6. :(
    Hate to do this but...

    And that isn’t the first place it appears...
  7. : o
  8. Can I join the class?
  9. Yeah I feel like I’ve seen comething similar in an online book
  10. Hey..... I'm not telling that I've written it,
    It's just a story so I shared. 😊
  11. Where's the tldr
  12. Nothing wrong with giving credit to the original source then my guy.
    Especially, if you copy and pasted everything else 😊
  13. It sounds more dramatic on the video :eek: so nice