So I have finally found time to update this story please everyone out there if I have grammatical issues and quiet a bit of swears I know those should be fixed but it's just I'm working on fixing them here it goes The Bottle Rocket raced past his head nearly smacking into his face "Shit! That was way to close for comfort" He whispered to himself. He started swerving drawing the attention of the three girls next to the cabin. Snaking down the mountain Seth thought up a plan; stop next to the pyromaniacs, race down the mountain, and confront the sober girls. But it wasn't that easy Deion pulled out a massive high grade rocket and he lit it!! The Rocket raced through the air and straight towards Seth! He dove to the side, the rocket roared past plowing into the tip of the mountain! Everything was quiet for a second before, the whole Shelf of snow break loose and started tumbling down towards the seven teenagers. "Holy Shit!" Gasped Seth. "RUN!!" He shrieked towards the pyromaniacs and to the girls. The girls tried the door to the cabin, locked! Then one of them backed up and dove through one of the side windows, creating an opening for the other girls. The guys weren't as fortunate, they took off running in the same direction the Avalanche was traveling, trying to outrun it. Seth stood up and started racing down the mountain towards the guys now running for their lives! Staying just out side the path of the avalanche he caught up to them quite quickly and was well ahead of the approaching snow. The avalanche was surprisingly slow staying comfortably behind them as Seth "pulled up" next to the guys and tackled Clay to the side out of the path of the looming Avalanche! But as he got up about to head down again to grab the next guy the avalanche, some how sped up an caught up to the fleeing teens and it swallowed Deion and Jonathan under a wave of snow. Seth raced along side the avalanche and sees the franticly waving hands of one of the guys, his waving somehow keepin himself on top of the snow Once again in a daring fit of courage Seth crashed into the avalanche and flew over the stream of churning snow clasping hands with the guy and hauled him to safety. It was Deion. The avalanche was quickly approaching the cabin and losing speed quickly. "Where's Jonathan!" Gasped Seth as he scanned the surface of the snow for his hand. Deion was laying face up unconscious and so was Clay. "Shit I'm on my own for this." Said Seth as he sprinted down the mountain towards the front of the avalanche it was now barely crawling forward and Seth easily caught up to the front of the once frightening sight. Seth once again scanned the snows glistening surface and saw a small flash of color and leapt into the snow and appearing on the other side with a shocked Jonathan in tow. They were safe...for now Good or bad? It's my first writing for a while so please tell me how I did /