The Final Breath

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *j1mb0_slice (01), Jul 29, 2011.

  1. If anyone wants to read more tell me if not I'm not gonna waste my time posting the rest of it
     
  2. Fine I'm done posting this story cause no one wants to read it I'll post a different one and a sign up thread for a different story
     
  3. Bump I'm gonna start writing again
     
  4. Bump still working on the update
     
  5. Listen if two people (not counting Danielle) say to continue I will and if u like guns horror action/drama I'd suggest u tell me to continue
     
  6. This is Good better than since
    More
    People
    Read it . Should I stop writing mines ?
     
  7. No keep your story going I actually just read and commented
     
  8. I saw but ura is more detailed and
    Has a lot more details . I'll keep writing if no one reads it I'll jts take out the bad parts and make it a childrens book and send it to scholastic 
     
  9. Lol that is a good plan maybe I could do that with mine too
     
  10. Lol
    Ikr I'll be 17 Famous author wohhooo
     
  11. Okay good luck I think I'll work on the next update I have the story 85% done but I need to decide where to end the update lol I'll post in a while
     
  12. Bump working on update
     
  13. I love this babe!
     
  14. Bump! But put paragraphe cuse I get lost a bit 
     
  15. Okay but I hate paragraphs but okay as soon as i find where i wrote the next part ill post it
     
  16. I like this!! Lmfao