The Empty Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 22, 2011.

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    Oh and to my readers pls bump this thread starting from tomorrow because im going to camp

    Imma update a really LONG one tonight so be sure to be on tonight
     
  2. Long update

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    Asmina's POV

    I stared at the ceiling for like what seemed an hour.

    "Can I get out now?" I asked Nipul.

    "Yeah I'll take you to your house.." he said.

    "Thank goodness I always hated hospitals," I said quietly.

    He ignored me and went out of the room. I followed him.

    I was confused. The bracelet I was wearing was supposed to have a protection charm. Why hadn't it worked on Nipul?

    I froze on my tracks when suddenly a suspicion hit me and called Hermes.

    "Hello, this is Hermes from Araina," Hermes said

    "Hermes!" I said with joy.

    "Asmina, can you come to Lake Ana for a minute? I want to tell you something," Hermes quickly said before ending the call.

    I stared at my phone half irritated and half confused.

    "Are you going to stand there forever?" asked Nipul apprearing out of thin air.

    I stared at him.

    "Did you hear...?" I asked not bothering to finish my question.

    "Hear what?" he said innocently.

    "Oh then never mind," I said before walking off.

    "Hey wait! Where are you going," he asked.

    "I need to go to a place," I replied.

    "But hey!" he called out to me.

    "I'm really busy I'll pay everything back to you later ok?" I called out before jogging to get a taxi.

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    Nipul's POV

    I stared at Asmina's back fustrated. Darn, what the hell was Hermes going to do with her?

    I needed to get Asmina to fall in love with me fast and that stupid idiot was getting in my way.

    I sighed.

    I wished I didn't have to do this mission. But I had to because our country needed the book Asmina had.

    The Empty Book.

    It would save all the people I loved from Hell and all the people I hated would be tossed into Hell


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    Asmina's POV

    I saw Hermes sitting at Ana Lake skimming stones.

    "Wow you're early at last," I said sitting down next to me.

    Hermes turned to me and just looked into my black eyes. He stared at me not saying a word.

    I looked at him and raised an eyebrow.

    "Is it time to not talk and irritate the hell out o-"

    Hermes pulled me into a hug. I froze surprised. I tried to pull back but I didn't manage to. His hug was so warm and so comfortable. I melted into it and Hermes and I stayed like that for a couple of minutes.

    In the end I pulled away. I stared at his eyes smiling.

    "Hermes do give me some warning before hugging me like that. I might be heartbroken when you have a new girlfriend," I said laughing lightly.

    "What do you like about me?" he asked suddenly.

    "Well, that you are a soldier who protects Arania and is loyal to Arania and um...you err...try to understand how others feel and um that you are and...." I said trailing off.

    He looked at me again.

    I stared at him confused. Why was he staring at me so much?

    "You know Asmina sometimes you annoy the hell out of me," he said sighing.

    "Why?" I asked suddenly irriated.

    "I like you Asmina. No that's not the right word, I love you Asmina. More than you imagine," he said touching my cheek gently.

    I looked at him unsure whether he was playing a prank on me or not.

    "I'll prove it to you," he murmured.

    He leaned in closer and closer to me


    Our lips met and suddenly we were kissing...kissing passionately....full of love that I hadn't even realized was there.....

    His lips felt warm and just right. It sent a feeling of warmth through my body and suddenly I wanted more.

    I grabbed his head and pulled him closer to me smushing him against my lips.

    He did the same to me only more powerfully.

    After we both drew away gasping for air.

    He smiled.

    "I always loved you. I always will Asmina," he said to me pulling me to his chest.

    I smiled happily.



    Was this what love felt like?



    It was so warm..



    So sweet....



    And so strong...



    Passionate....


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    If there are errors I'm sorry I'm so -yawn- tired today
     
  3. Lol.
    I'm tired. I just drank some coffee...
     
  4. Did I see right? Ur tired because u drank coffee
     
  5. It has no affect on me. It only causes me to have no energy. 
     
  6. Coffee makes me sleepy. :3
     
  7. Aki I updated. XD I NEED MORE COFFEE SHOTS!
     
  8. Its the same thing for me  I feel sleepy when i drink coffee 
     
  9. Miao
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    Asmina's POV

    I stared at the same word for 10 minutes before sighing and going over to wake Reanne up.

    "Oi Reanne! I dunno what this says,"I said shaking her awake.

    "I'm getting up. Jeez. You never let me sleep for more than an hour," she mumbled yawning.

    She rubbed her eyes and took the paper from my hands.

    "Eh? It's just homework...shove it into the machine Mr Lankade gave you. Imma go back to sleep and don't wake me up again," she said and tossed the paper to me.

    I caught the paper and walked over to the machine and begun unwrapping it.

    I froze when it had all been unwrapped. There was a letter addressed to me...

    It read






    To:Asmina Marie Komachi Xanthippi and Reanne Anna Elizabeth Quena.




    How long had Mr Lankade known the truth?









    That.....









    Me and Reanne were not sisters.......










    I stared at it.









    First it was Hermes and now this....












    Trouble must be my brother, I thought before passing out again for the second time.

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    I'm so lonely

    5ppl comment I continue
     
  10. BUMP. 