The Empty Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 22, 2011.

  1.  Make that four.
     
  2. Spent ages looking for this story in page 2 and after never thought it was in page 1 I'm so dumb I'll continue this story soon If anyone still reads it which I doubt
     
  3. I might as well transfer this to my notes

    I sat on my new bed for a few minutes. Just great. Hermes just had to make up some fake background about me and the worst thing was I didn't know what the damned background was.

    Ok I was from a orphanage. The orphanage was awful.....and I didn't know anything else.

    I glared at the stupid button that had come with me and now was in a corner of the room, you could barely see it. I sighed and took my phone out of my little bag and called Hemes.

    "Yes this is Hermes from Arania. What may I do for you?" a husky male voice was heard.

    "Hermes I need to know what stinking background you put me as" I said not bothering to mask my irritation.

    "Ah, Asmina always irritated as usual.." Hermes said. I could picture him smirking.

    "Just shut up and tell me my stupid bakground!" I snarled

    "Fine. You are from a awful orphanage called the 'Care Orphanage' and you are 16 and in Grade 11. And you can make the rest up like what your name is and etc. Happy?" he said

    "Extremely" I said sarcastically.

    I ended the phone satisified.

    I then rushed to the computer that was on my desk. I didn't have a single clue how normal humans usually behaved.

    After I had finished my research

    I heard my now mother calling for dinner.

    I went down the steps slowly to the table.

    I smiled at everyone and gasped. I saw my younger sister, Reanne.
    What was she doing here? How did she escape from the Jail, Naga? What was happening?

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    Asmina gasps too much
     
  4. XD. I love it! It's like a sequel explaining an unknown prequel! I gotta try that for my story. Thanks Akimoto! 
     
  5. Thx aaaaaand call me aki pls
     
  6. 


    Aki!



    XD my obsession with Haruhi and Nagato aren't helping me. XD
     
  7. I need some criticism!
     
  8.  oops. Carried away. 

    It's pretty epic. I don't see no critism need. 
     
  9. I just saw what I wrote on the very first chap. "Hey this is my FIRST TIME writing" I'm so dumb.
     
  10. that's okay aki.

    Your doing epicly awesome!
     
  11. No criticism Mordici?
     
  12. Nope. Just epic-ness.

    I'm Julie-su. Call me Julie if it's to long.
     
  13. woot woot 
     
  14. We post at same time. 
     
  15.  EPIC FRAPPPINESSS
     
  16. Hey does anyone know how to put pictures in this forum? Cuz I'm trying to put a picture of Asmina that I drew.

    I'm gonna write the update in around 20min!