The Dark Kiss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Michelle2525 (01), May 19, 2011.

  1. Tonight was perfect. We watched the fireworks, and Damen bought my a Disney jacket. It was black leather with a big Minnie mouse on the back. He had my name sown on the jacket. I love it! It was extremely expensive though, I have no clue how he could afford it. I mean he lives on his own and makes his own money. I think it's pretty cool how he doesn't have to worry about parents yelling or getting pissed off at him, but he says it gets very lonely in that big house. "Oh crap!!!" I said looking at my watch. " I need to get home now! My dad is gonna kill me!"I said. "Well I like you alive, so let's run to the car." he said with a laugh. So we ran all the way to the car we didn't even take the tram to the parking lot. We got in the car, and he started to speed. I was surprised no cop came after him. "Well did you have fun?" he asked opening my car door. "Fun? It was amazing, and I love my new jacket. Thank you so much Damen!" I said giving him a hug as we walked to the door. "Your welcome Michelle. I will see you at school. I love you." he said grinning. He said it for the first time, he said he loves me. "I love you too, Damen." I said as he leaned in for a kiss on the lips, the door opened."Michelle, get in this house young lady! There will be no kissing tonight!" my dad yelled as I ran inside. "Go home Damen! She will see you later, weather I like it or not!" I heard my dad yell at him. Then I heard Damen's car door shut,and he sped away.
     
  2. Great Update
     
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  4. You should continue. I really like it. 
     
  5. Lol it's really good until they went 2 Disney land - r they 10????
    It's a very good story
    Carry on
     
  6. "Oh my God Dad, he was just giving me a kiss!" I yelled. "Kisses lead to other stuff, and other stuff leads to babies. Are you ready for a baby?!" my dad yelled back. "Dad I'm a virgin! He is a virgin.... I think. We are not gonna do anything." I said calming down as I walk up to my room. "Sweetie, I'm glad your a virgin. Just make sure you stay that way until your married, or at least until your 52." he yelled up the stairs. I closed the door and ignored him. Why are dads so annoying? What's that banging on my window? I looked out of my window, and saw Damen. I opened the window I whispered " What the heck are you doing here?!" he looked up and said "I came to Kiddnap you, and take you to a party." "Hold on I will be out in a minute. Go wait in the car." I said closing the window. I slowly went down the stairs. When I got halfway out the door, my dad asked "Where are you going?" "For a walk. I need to think. I will be back later." I said "Ok, just make sure you take some pepper spray." he said. " Kay, bye Dad." I said finally out of the house. I got into Damen's car, and off we went to a party.
     
  7. Lol I like the bit

    Sneaking off to partys
     
  8. Lol my real life is inspiration for this story lol 
     
  9. "Here we are!" Damen smiled as he opened my door. "It's really loud, and is that....is that beer I'm smelling?" I said taking in the air of freshly opened alcohol. "Yes it is beer, and vodka mixed with illegal drugs." Damen said as he tried not to laugh. "I'm sorry Damen, I'm just so new to this." I said. "Your a party virgin?" he asked smiling. "Party virgin? If that means never been to a party where cops could get involved, then yes. I am a party virgin." I said now completely shy. "Well after tonight you won't be!" he said enthusiastically. He dragged me inside the house. They played my favorite song, Party Rock Anthem by LMFAO. The music blasted everywhere, I almost went deaf. Everyone had alcohol in their hand, chugged it down, or was getting more. Damen directed me to the table that was fully loaded with alcohol and made me a cup of Grey Goose Vodka. "I have to drink this?" I said pointing at the red cup. "Well unless you want to do illegal drugs, then yes you do!" he said yelling over the music. "But it would be illegal to drink too, because I'm only 17!" I yelled back. "Just drink it! You will be fine! Michelle, you gotta
    Learn to break the rules alittle!" he said. Finally I took a sip. I actually liked it, so I chugged the rest down. Before I knew it, I got another refill, and another, and another. I guess I know what happens next. I get wasted and do things I regret, and won't remember in the morning. I was so drunk I passed out on the couch at the party.that is all I remember.
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  10. The next day, when I woke up with a serious hangover, I realized I wasn't in my bed. I wasn't at my house. I looked around freaked out, then realized I'm at Damen's house, in his bed. Oh crap, I hope we didn't do what I think we did. Damen walked in smiling. That is sign, I think we did 'it'. "Did you sleep well?" he said handing me orange juice. "Was I supposed too? What the hell happened last night?! I need to know now!" I yelled. Damen started to laugh. I felt confused. "Well we definitely didn't do what you think we did. But YOU on the other hand, let's just say you went crazy. You danced on a table in your underwear, sang, and made out with me." he said with a grin. "You also broke a window." he added. "So you drank too?" I asked. "Hell no! I don't drink. I used to but I stopped." he said. "Okay? Let me get this straight you wanted me to drink, but your against alcohol?" I asked confused. "Yes, and I'm glad I did too. You really needed to let loose. You tried to do 'it' with me, which was funny, but I refused. I knew that if you were not intoxicated you would want to wait. So I didn't take advantage of you, I could have, but I didn't." he said leaning in for a kiss. "Now get up! Your dad is gonna be pissed off, and I need to get you home before he calls 911 or buys a shotgun." he said laughing and pulling me out of his soft bed.
     
  11. o_o. U are sooooo lucky to have that kind of boyfriend lmao. XD awesome story!!
     
  12. Awesome story, can't wait to read the rest
     
  13. "Dad, I'm home!" I yelled as I walked through the door. I shoved Damen away, because I don't want my dad finding out I was with him. Damen got in his car and left,and just in time. " Where the hell have you been?!" my dad yelled angrily. "Oh, Well, Ashley wanted me to come over for a sleepover." I said hoping he will buy my cover. My dad is the guy that completely trusts me so I'm sure he will believe me. He sighed then said " Next time, make sure you tell or call me when you want to sleep at a friend's house." "Yeah, ok Dad." I said walking up the stairs. I definitely had enough fun for a day, so I went to sleep and lazed around my house the rest of the day.
     
  14. Now i want moar... MOAR!!!
     
  15. When I got to school, I saw Damen standing by his car. Smiling yet again. "Why do you always smile?" I asked walking up to him. " Do you not want me to smile. I can frown if you want me too." he said now frowning. "No it's fine. Go ahead and smile, but when you fail your biology test because you didn't study, I know you won't be smiling." I said with a laugh. We went our separate ways for classes, and then at lunch we met up again. "Hey how do you think you did on your test?" I said with a slight grin. "Oh, I could have done it with my eyes closed." he said. "I can too, but I wouldn't be able to see anything." I said with a laugh. "Your such a smart ass." he said giving me a kiss on the lips. "Yeah, a smart ass who studied for the test, unlike some people I know of." I said sitting down on a bench. "Want to go do something?" Damen said in a whisper. "Like what? I'm not gonna ditch school." I said thinking he has officially gone crazy. "Well today you are gonna ditch school, because your with me and I don't want you to be a fuddy duddy." He said. "What is a fuddy duddy?" I asked confused. " It's an expression you know, like stick in the mud." he said. "Oh, well I certainly don't want to be a fuddy duddy. So what is your brilliant plan to get out of here?" I asked. "Walk out, get in the car, and go some place fun." he said pulling me up. "Won't we get caught?" I asked. "Michelle, you need to live alittle. Don't be afraid to get caught. Just follow me and you will be fine." he said as we walked out of the school gate and into his car. What did I just get myself into? Worse than that. What am I going to tell my dad?
     
  16. I will try to update again today my brain is hurting lol
     
  17. I'm a amateur writer, so please excuse my lack of details and not taking your breath away.
     
  18. Haha! He's just like my late BFF, Nicolae!!! :'D