The Dark Kiss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Michelle2525 (01), May 19, 2011.

  1. Damen walked up to me after class and said " Hey there is a Halloween party at my house tonight. You should come it's gonna be fun." he said handing me the paper. " Hmmmm..... A huge house filled with loud music and dressed up drunk teenagers with no adults in sight. I think I will pass. Plus do your parents even know?" I said wondering. " I'm emancipated, so I don't live with my parents. I'm considered a grown adult. Jealous?" he said teasingly. " Oh, I am so sorry I didn't know...." I said when he cut me off. " it's fine, really. It was a bad home life so I got a emancipation." he said shrugging it off. " You better come tonight in the best costume you have. Please you won't regret it. All your friends are coming, actually the whole school is." he said laughing and walking away.
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    I decided to go to the party. I also will wear the best costume ever. I love Halloween. I am one of those people who spend tons of money on their costume. This year I decided to go as Marie Antoinette, my mom knows the costume designer for the movie so I had her pull some strings and get me the beautiful blue dress and wig Kirsten Dunst wore in the movie. I put the dress on, and loved it. It fit perfectly. I'm officially ready for the party. As Marie Antoinette would say " Let them eat cake!"
     
  2. When I got to Damen's house, I was amazed everything looked extremely expensive, every single decoration was perfectly in place. His house definitely looked like a haunted mansion. I walked through the big bock front doors and saw Ashley talking to Jenifer, the head cheerleader, Ashley was wearing a provocative bunny costume. Now days it seems like almost every girl dresses up in provocative costumes. I went to go get some fruit punch, when all of a sudden I see him. He is always around, but then after all this is his house. "Hello. Marie Antoinette?" he asked with a smile. " Yeah. Count Fersen?" I asked suspiciously. " Yes indeed." he said with a grin. Of course, out of every costume he could possibly choose he chooses Count Fersen, Marie Antoinette's lover. She cheated on the duke with him. I should have seen this coming. Is he trying to tell me something. "What's wrong?" he said. " You know exactly what is wrong. You deliberately chose that costume, because some how you found out what my costume was!" I yelled storming out of the room. " God, are you like bipolar?" he said following me. " No, and I find that offensive." I said sitting on a chair outside by the pool. " Well your so on and off, I don't know what to think. I don't know if you like me or hate me." he said sitting next to me. "I.... I have to go" I said getting up. " No your not running away again." he said grasping my arm. " I like you ok. I really have to go." I said finally leaving. When I left he looked shocked. I never thought I could like a guy like Damen, but I do. And now I have no clue what to do. I don't know how to handle it. I feel completely out of control of my life.
     
  3. Sorry people but I'm gonna stop writing this story indefinitely. I might start it up again later I might not but for now I'm gonna stop writing this story. Sorry guys 
     
  4. S its spelled with two n's not one (sorry but thats how its spelled) and sorry for correcting you but u did spell my name wrong
     
  5. Wow this is tge best thing ive seen on this game.
     
  6. Thank you I'm not sure if I should continue it cause I don't feel like enough people read it
     
  7. Update already !!! BUMP!! MAJOR BUMP !!
     
  8. Chapter:I have no clue

    "Hello beautiful!" Damen said to me with a smile. "Hi?" I said totally confused with what was going on. "What's wrong?" he said. "Well you called me beautiful." I said shocked. "Yeah, because you are." he said putting his arm around my shoulder. "Thank you? I think." I said still confused. " I have a question for you. Do you mind if I take you on a date tonight?"he said waiting for my response. "Yeah sure. Where at?" I asked. "It is a surprise, and I know you won't have trouble meeting me at my house. Might I remind you of that?" he said playfully. "Will you let it go, I mean you broke into my house too." I said. "Yes, that is very true.Well, I guess I will see you tonight then. Be at my house at 5." he said giving me a kiss on the cheek and walking away. It felt weird, it's like ever since I told him I like him he has been acting creepy. The kiss almost felt like it was a dream, it just lingered on my cheek. The heat of his lips overwhelmed me. I wonder where he is talking me tonight?
     
  9. MoarLots of people read this great story so keep it goin!
     
  10. Why did you stop writing?!?!?!?!?!?!
     
  11. "Disneyland?" I said getting into the car. "Yes, it is the happiest place on earth! Don't you like Disneyland?"he said with a grin."I have never been there before. Is it fun?" I asked. "is it fun? Of course it is. Haha they had this one ride mission to mars that every couple wanted to go on. They ended up calling it the make out ride." he said with a laugh. " Can we go on it!" I yelled. What the hell did I just say? I think I just asked him to make out with me."Haha, no we can't they don't have it anymore,but if you wanna make out I'm sure we can find a ride for that."he said with the biggest smile I have ever seen. "Well how much longer until we are there?" I asked curiously. " We are here. We just gotta park my car." he said. We found a parking spot,and he opened my car door for me. " Oh crap!" he yelled looking at his watch." What?" I said wondering what was wrong. " We are gonna miss our reservation at the blue bayou." he said now rushing us through the ticket booth. "Blue bayou?"I asked confused. "It is the best place to eat at Disneyland and very hard to get a reservation for. If we hurry we can make it. You will love it." he said smiling as we step rushingly through the crowd.
     
  12. Bump  I love it keep going!!!
     
  13. "Oh my God!!!" I said as I looked in the Blue Bayou. It was beautiful. It was extremely dark and surrounded by water and inside the ride pirates of the Caribbean. It was a total dream. " So do you like it?" he asked. "Hell ya!!! This is perfect Damen!" I said kissing him on the cheek as we took our seat right next to the water. "I'm glad you like it. Maybe Pirates of the Caribbean will be our make out ride." he said with a laugh. " Well we won't know unless we try." I said playfully. "I am a gentleman and I understand if you dont wanna kiss me, but I can't handle this right now I need to kiss you." he said pulling me in. This kiss was the best kiss I ever had. It was warm and inviting. I felt woozy, and when the waiter came to take our order Damen eyed him away. I think everyone stared at us. I knew tonight would be perfect.
     
  14. Yea it would be perfect!! KEEP GOING THIS ROCKS!!