I'm really sorry you guys for the long awaited update I have been super busy with the editing my story and putting it on my laptop. Pffft I will update sooooon! [color=light blue] I promise ahaha [/color] [color=dark blue] and please bump this once and awhile so I don't forget. [/color] so once again sorry for the inconvenience and I will update as soon as possible! Love you all my loyal fans (I think that's what I'm supposed to call you readers! well peace out!!! ^.^ tar
Jack in my edited version im keeping your name... But im using your personality... I will probs name someone after your real self
Chapter-6 part-1 The room starts up in a small chatter again, my eyes flit around nervously. I wonder to myself what they are doing here? Weren't they at the hospital? Jack approaches me hands in his pockets, not really a smile on his face. He sits down in an opposite chair and I look hard into his eyes. "So. Hit by a car huh?" He nods softly to himself. "Didn't you always say you were going to go out with a... bang? " My heart does a tiny summersault and I force words out of my mouth. "Yes. I did. But I'm not gone yet." I look at jack defiantly, and he looks right back, no emotions showing. "How do you know?" His words start to echo and my mind races. What does he mean? I try to speak but ... I can't. No! What? Ah! Stop! Then... I feel nice today so here is chapter-6 part,2 I sit up. White. Wait... It can't be... I was, dreaming? I lay back onto the pillows and gives out a sob, I didn't really see them. My Papi is still gone. Jack is still mad. My life is still terrible. I roll over and closeses my eyes. Just have to fall back asleep. I tell myself soothingly. But funny enough I couldn't sleep. Not one wink. My wind was flicking around about the dream. I checked the clock a couple of times. But I soon realized it wasn't working. Maybe If I read my mind will calm down. I reach for the light switch but it doesn't turn on. Funny. Power outage? Then my door opens and a nurse comes in. "Torrance. Are you awake?" I nod then realizing she can't see me in the dark I whisper. "Yes. I am." the maid flicks a switch and all the lights turn on. I blink back in surprise and let's out a tiny gasp, "Ow!" the lights blind me for a moment and the nurse mutters. "Sorry sorry." She dims them all down so it's just a yellowish glow in the room. A man steps into the room. A black scarf is woven around the lower half of his face so I can only see his eyes. I blink as he looks into mine. A twinkle flashes through them and I can tell he is smiling. I notice a heavy trench coat and a black top hat. Funny, I think to myself. Very formal. He sits at the end of my bed and the lady walks out. "Hello." A gruff voice says to me and I blink back in surprise. Not sure who this is I look away. "Erm. hullo." I say in a small voice. He reaches out a hand and touches my face softly. "Been awhile." He looks back into my eyes and suddenly memories flash through my brain and I cringe. "Yes. It has been a long time." WHO IS IT?