the beginning or is it the ending? 0.0

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tarru, Nov 15, 2012.

  1. Buuuummp! Update soon!~
     
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    Chapter- 5 part 2 the other half
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    We continued on down the winding hallways. My thoughts racing, and for some reason I was crying too.

    I remember when I was little before my Papi left. How I had got caught up in the family business. Traders. Yes we traded art. Those were the good days; I miss them.

    We finally reach a plum colored door. I could hear sounds coming from behind the lovely door. Voices, familiar ones too. Papi opened the door and I think all of my sanity washed right back into me. I was out of my snapped faze and into something totally different; a dark, deep, hate.

    My eyes flash from face to face I then lingered on one face in particular. I utter only one word. "Jack." it was more of a hiss. The room went silent. What it looks like I didn't really pay attention. I just continue to glare at Jack. He smirks back looking me over with a tiny nod. "Hello to you too." he taunts. HOW DARE YOU TAUNT ME JACK! I want to scream at him. But I keep my cool and walk in.

    I look at the others. Some smile some just look away. I can tell what they are thinking. ~isn't that the dead kid? Shouldn't she not be alive? Oh darling you'r back! Hello Torrance. -.- ~ I shiver and Papi takes me to a chair he has been oddly quite.
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    Ugh ok I have a little bit of writers block. Be back soon!
     
  3. Bump! Really good! (Btw check PM about the Cats RP thread..-. )
     
  4. Thanks and look Jesse in sorry. I was just pissed and it seems you were supporting a couple of ... Bad rps
     
  5. ** Papi takes me to a chair; he has been oddly quiet.
     
  6. Ahaha sorry may update a little later on in the week cuz I'm typing all this up... I'm thinking bout sending this to an editor and then off to a press. ^.^ wish me luck!
     
  7. Wow, you should. :D Good luck. :p
     
  8. Bump! Answer me on Survival and New Darkness Arise woman! 
     
  9. Ahaha thanks! And I will in awhile raven
     
  10. Blump. I wanna know what happens next. >.< If you make this a book, I'm defo buying it.:D
     
  11. But why D: You get to show off to people you're in a book.