the beginning or is it the ending? 0.0

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tarru, Nov 15, 2012.

  1. Ha Jack got pranked! Even in stories he's a grumpy person!
     
  2. I'm not grumpy 
     
  3. Sure about that?
     
  4. Naw he's not grumpy. Just when you wake him up... XP
     
  5. :p Lol ok I'll try and believe that
     
  6. Bump! I see a Jack and no Jess...*Cough, cough* *Hint, hint* I wanna be a grumpy granny...I don't mind really.:p As long ad I'm in it.:D ((Don't feel obliged to put me in, I don't mind too much really.))
     
  7. Read chapter 1 part 2 and you shall have you'r wish Jess! Ahaha you come in soon
     
  8. How could I forget my Jessie?
     
  9. How can you forget your May-May
     
  10. 0.0

    DAMN! :'(
     
  11. How can I? Ok your next may-may!
     
  12. I meant like not talking to me but otay
     
  13. Oh ok! Lol!

    Here is the long awaited UPDATE!
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    Chapter-5 part 2
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    I follow my Papi slightly confused to where he is taking me. "You moved." I shiver looking around at the unformilualr rooms. "Yea. A long time ago. After you and Jack had a spat."
    I cringe at the mention of Jack's name, I haven't talked to him in a long time. We fought when I was 13 and now I'm 17. I give a sigh. "Papi, where are we going?" I look at him my eyes wide. "Surprise. But you will see some people you might have missed." I pause for a second and looks into a room I see a bare room, all black. At one wall there is a SURPER expensive painting. I smile at the day we got that. First time anyone has taken from the metropolis in new York. "Still have it?" I look at Papi smiling. "Of course. Your last job." I nod my smile falling.

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    Sorry! It's super short! I will continue on later it's just I have to do some things. It's super rough too! No editing! Super sorry!