the beginning or is it the ending? 0.0

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tarru, Nov 15, 2012.

  1. UPDATE SOON 
     
  2. first on page 5 
     
  3. Oh yay! I will! 
     
  4. /)0.0(\ MY STORY! IT WAS FOUND! ^.^
     
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    Chapter-4
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    I must say, it was never a sunny day at my house. My parents always were yelling at each other, screaming, sometimes hitting. Of course being a good girl I just stood and watched. Unsure of what was going on. But one night, a very late night I have to say. My father came home drunk, I was 9. Then I knew what was going on, then I knew what my sister and brother had been saving me from, right THEN I wanted to get out. A couple years later. I was 13, I never remembered a happy night at home until I told Johnny.
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    I had blew it. Our love, friendship, everything, was gone. I knew right then and there I had ruined everything. My mind flew from door to door of unhappy memory. I knew this happened to some kids; they can't take the stress of life so they snap. This was me snapping.
    Why was everything SO WHITE? I felt my mind scream at me to get out. That night I was alone. All alone. I pulled all tubes that were connected into my body and ran, I heard an alarm my breath came in white plumes as I was hit by a wall of frozen. Lights, dim, in the distance, frost crunched under my socked feet. How long was I in the hospital? JEEZ! Several months at least!
    I stumble, the pavement racing towards me until someone grabs my arm and brings me into a tight grasp. I knew right away who I was with and started to cry. Great balls of tears gushed down my cheeks. And I uttered one word into the night.
    "daddy."
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  6. Lol thanks Dante
     
  7. DAMN! I'm not calling you by the wrong name right? 0.0
     
  8. Lol of course!!
     
  9. Hmmmm thinking of closing this down... No one is really reading it.
     
  10. I'm reading it!! I equal an infinity readers 
     
  11. AHAHAH fair enough raven