The Beautiful Stranger (One-Shot)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SophiaBennett (01), Jul 17, 2012.

  1. Not terrible i very much enjoyed it
     
  2. This means two things:
    1 I'm surrounded and writing with amazing writers
    2 I have to write next
     
  3. You better update soon!!!
     
  4. Oh my word Angela, it wasn't rubbish! And update now!!! If you do it now, I'll be able to update tomorrow morning (UK time)
     
  5. I at a friends house, probably sleepin over so idk hehe
     
  6. Do you want me to update?
     
  7. Okay... There will be an update soon :)
     
  8. YAY!!! 
     
  9. Lydia's POV

    I woke up and groggily looked around. The clock in my head told me it was about seven in the morning. I shivered and brought a hand up to my cheek. I was freezing. I decided to get up and take a stroll around the house, check if there was anything to eat, then leave the house and move on.

    Just as I was putting the blanket neatly back on the bed, a voice spoke out, startling me. "Good morning... Where do you think you're going?" I turned around, to see Edward sitting in an old rickety chair, watching me. Immediately thoughts started coming through my head, strange thoughts, unlike any thoughts I'd ever had before.

    Was my hair sticking up? Did I have circles under my eyes? Were my clothes messy? Was I clean? Did I smell alright?

    I quickly shooed the thoughts away, before I spoke. "I'm going to find some food to eat, then I'm leaving. Thank you for being so kind to me. I appreciate it." With that, I walked out of the room, not expecting him to follow. But he did.

    ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•Edward's POV

    I followed her downstairs, cornering her. "What do you think you're doing?" she demanded. "I don't think you should leave," I said, my voice dark "There's quite a lot of dangerous things out there. Stay, here, with me. I won't try anything, I will leave you alone. Please, stay."

    In the last sentence, my voice cracked, making me sound less sincere. I cursed myself under my breath, then she took her opportunity and ran. Through the house, frantically looking for a way out. I followed, like lightning, and found her frozen at the back door. I peered around her to see what she was looking at. "Oh my..." I whispered.
     
  10. CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!! Haha lol 
     
  11. AWESOME!!! Bump!!!
     
  12. Gosh dang it i hate cliff hangers...
     
  13.  Same
     
  14. I'm not gonna update!!! Someone else do it! (btw for the reader(s) out there, we [me, Angela and hiUrock] have no plans whatsoever for this story... We just make it up as we go along!!) anyway, someone update!! 
     
  15. I will, but it might take some time because I have to update my story with toxic… and I have no idea what to do for that either
     
  16. HiUrock should probably update instead of me
     
  17. It would be a good idea, since it is a collaboration