The Beautiful Stranger (One-Shot)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SophiaBennett (01), Jul 17, 2012.

  1. Well here goes nothing, y'all are gonna either like it or hate it. BTW, I'm not as detailed as y'all, but I'll try
     
  2. Hope y'all like it, I really LOVE writing with y'all (-Angela123- and SophieBennett)

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    Lydia (the girls) POV:

    I kept walking, that strang dude was following me. I was already late to go home, I don't need a guy to make me more impatient than I already was.

    The guy followed me home! Instead of going to my crappy, red bricked, two story house, I kept walking. He still followed, so I slowed down. He asked me,"You know where your going? You starting to slow down."

    I thought it was time he got some sense nocked into him. I turned around and frowned. "I think I forgot how to get home." He gave me a 'im a hero and I need to save the beautiful girl' look.

    He grabbed my arm and pulled me close. I smiled at him and let him. He didn't know what he got coming. He looked into my eyes and said,"You are beautiful, why don't we go to my house. We can find out where you live once you get some sleep." Does he even remember me slapping him? I looked at his red mark of my handprint.

    "Okay, handsome. Just one thing first," I said and pulled his lips close to mine. "And what is that?" he asked in a serenaded voice. "This," I practically screamed. Before our lips touched, I pushed him off and kicked him in his knee.

    I started running to my house, I didn't know if he was still on the ground or if he was chasing me. I didn't care, I just had to get home. The high heels I was wearing didnt help my speed of running.

    Once I got to my steps to my porch, I was out of breath. But he was right behind me, he was like the speed of lightning. "How did you-?" I asked, but I was to out of breath to speak.

    He walked closer and said, "You shouldn't have done that."
     
  3. Sorry it was short): I'm kinda busy
     
  4. Bump Bump
    Given me goosebumps
    Haha wow vampire or not, I think anyone's ears would be ringing after that! 
     
  5. Wow, really? I didnt think I did such a good job, so that means a real lot to me
     
  6. I think it's great… except didn't Sophia say she was homeless?
     
  7. 
    I'm not such a great writer after all
     
  8. It's fine, you didn't see it.

    ATTENTION EVERYONE!!

    The girl does not live in a red brick two story house!!! She is homeless!!!
     
  9. Yes...... that was her grandma's house, she just baked her cookies!!!!!! She don't live there!! She just wanted cookies!
     
  10.  Yummy cookies!! (Even though those aren't actually cookies)
     
  11. Yea.... what the heck are those things anyways!?!?
     
  12. Well… -clears throat for long rant-

     These are rice cakes. If you haven't had them before, they're really good. Although, I've had cube rice cakes and circle rice cakes and lumpy rice cakes (don't ask), I've never actually had a triangle rice cake. And these must be brown rice cakes. Rice cakes made out of brown rice. So the people who try to stay healthy can have healthy rice cakes. (But I certainly wouldn't want to eat those. Brown rice is disgusting!!!!) Of course, those could always be white rice cakes with a large amount of soy sauce on it, but that would be very unhealthy, and waaaaaay too salty. No one would want to eat that.

    And, it makes sense. The makers of Emoji are Japanese, and a lot of the foods are Japanese foods, including the rice cakes. (Except the rice cakes might be Chinese… I don't know. But I should know this, because I am Chinese) For example, a bento box. Or sashimi. Or ramen noodles.  Or… some kind of soup that's Japanese but I have no idea what it's called. Or rice. Except I'm fairly certain rice is Chinese… I eat it every day so I really should know. Yes, I think it's Chinese.

    SO. That concludes my long lecture on why this is SO not a cookie.
     
  13. Woooooooowwwwwwwwww, so their not a cookie? Hahajk
     
  14. Don't make me go all rage mode on you… and/or say my long rant again
     
  15. Dont go cookie crazy on me!!
     
  16. Don't worry, I won't… but we need to stop spamming Sophia's thread 
     
  17. Ok then..... BUMP