She says she's busy... Imma go now... Look after the story.. Keep it alive... Keep Edward sexy *fangirl scream* Anyways, bye. Luv ya all Kaithxbye... (I took that from Sky..) -Søphīå
I will. Just let me read the story again. ._. I am sorry for the wait, I have been extremely busy, do you know how hard it is to find a good grand piano? Extremely. But i shall update TODAY.
Hmm, finally. Really everyone, I AM SO SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE OF DOING MY JOB. Ugh, I don't do this often, just.......Oh so busy. Enjoy and I'm sorry if it's not what you wanted. ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~• Lydia's P.O.V The hay was breathing, a musky, alcoholic scent in the air, it was probably a drunk that just decided to go into property to just sleep. Typical. But I hadn't quite got a good picture of the drunk. Then I saw the drunk get up, and got a better frame for my eyes. He was about 6"9 with dusted black hair, probably from the specks of dust and hat that lay on the premises, and he was so unbelievably tan, it was better than the hay, and he had green eyes, green as the grassy plains. He groaned and shook through the hay, his voice confused,"Wh-What?" When he saw us, he practically jumped off from his spot and crouched down, his eyes narrowing. Edward's chest was grumbling to a long growl, and it danced around, it was so visibly clear to me that he didn't like his presence, but he his eyebrows were dull and they rose, in a laughing matter, but he had that way of making me melt, really? A vampire. I remember. He yawned in fear,"You the owners?" He had a foreign accent, but it was very dry to understand, since he probably have slept here for days,but I could barely understand him. Edward shook his head back and forth, and he couldn't believe his ears, he was totally annoyed, but when he saw the stranger have a suspending smile across his smug face, he covered himself to protect me. "Why are you hiding me?"I asked, clearly confused of what he was trying to do. Edward responded lowly,"I. Don't. Trust. Him." I shrugged, but I kept caution. The stranger had his hands up. What? Why did he do that? Then his smile rose, and his teeth gleamed,"I know who you are." Edward's fangs were so close to appear, he was ready to attack. I just stood there, confused, and relieved. HOW CAN HE KNOW A VAMPIRE IN 5 MINUTES?! The stranger took Edward by the arms and and pinned him so easily, I had rp gawk, but my eyes narrowed. "Hold still, I'm not gonna hurt you.", his voice silky, he seemed to be from India,but I couldn't match it to anything, really. Edward screamed my name and I knew the signal was to punch the shit outta him. I lunged into him, but he just stood there, like a statue, only he was holding me by my hair, and it hurt. "Ow. Ow. OW! OWWW!"I bellowed at him, showing him how rude he was. The stranger finally put me down, and my scalp was on fire, and Edward was cold from the touch, he felt icier that ever. He wasn't breathing, nor moving. I screamed so shrill, my tears started to flow. Did he kill him? Did he kill Edward. No, it can't be true. Then the strangers jade eyes fell on me, and he held his warm hands, rough and silky, on my wrists, and I struggled to be let go of and looked away, but pain arose as I did. With Edward motionless, and my eyes watering, the stranger suddenly came up to me and pulled into the sweetest embrace today, he felt so warm. "Madeline, I never knew the day I would see you again."he sighed happy through my sobs. Then my eyes froze. Madeline? ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~~•~•~•~• Hope it's ok and you enjoy it. I shall want to update again.
Sentence structure and misplaced words create a jumbled mess. This post could use some serious editting, no offense.
Sky! Angela! Hey! It's me! I'm back! Anyways, just checking up on the story (I finally found an Internet café) and I have no idea where you're going Sky, but I like it!! Yeah.. So imma go now and I'll be back on PIMD properly from the 18th Kaithxbye -Sophia
Look. I don't know the story entirely. I just made a twist where this dude, he can be whatever you want, but he thinks the girl looks like his lost love who's name was Madeline, understand? Sorry if it wasn't that clear, I just don't understand romance.
I wasn't talking about the ending.. What I meant was nothing was clear at all until the ending (of the update), I worded wrong sorry! I found wifi along a stretch of highway on my vacation, so I checked up on PIMD. Which is why I'm on at the moment. Temporarily able to connect so (and im not spamming) updating my own story right now isn't possible. That last bit was for Angela and Soph btw. Thanks! Byee till Monday! -MikalaMariee..
Short, but it's something… I'm so sorry for making you wait! ~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~ Lydia's POV "…Madeline? Who's Madeline?" I questioned warily. He ignored me and stared into my eyes. "I told you I would come back," he breathed. "I never wanted to leave you. It's me, Matt." "Well, I'm not-" I was cut off by the sound of Edward groaning softly. Quickly, I rushed to his side and helped him sit up. "Are you okay?" I whispered anxiously. "I'd be better if that ******* didn't touch me." Edward glared at Matt. He was still staring at me. Edward slowly got up, watching him carefully. Then a realization seemed to dawn on his face. "Lydia, we have to get out of here. Now." ~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~