The Beautiful Stranger (One-Shot)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SophiaBennett (01), Jul 17, 2012.

  1. oh sorry it's snippet lol
     
  2. Ohh.. What 'little piece of work' do you mean, 'cause I don't think the whole story is little...
     
  3. Wow how old you this is fantastic
     
  4. Thank you from me and Angela

    -Sophia
     
  5. You have scarred me for life! Im to innocent for this! 
    *Covers Eyes.*
     
  6. Omg! Found this on accident and I love it! It's so good! But I feel Bad for the girl and man, that guy is MEAN! Lol!
     
  7. Haha sorry!!!!!
    Angela's updating later

    -Sophia
     
  8. In four hours or so. Gives me enough time to stall
     
  9. Well detailed nice 
     
  10. I'm going to update now!!!
     
  11. Short. Yeah I know.

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    Lydia's POV

    "Good morning, Lydia." I cracked open an eyelid to see Edward's smiling face resting next to mine.

    "Hey-" As a draft of wind hit my bare body, the events of last night came flooding back to me. "****." I just had sex with a vampire. A monster. Someone whose job was to kill girls.

    But the strange part was, I loved it. It was so incredible, I could feel sparks underneath the heat of his body. There was so much passion in it. I'm sure Edward enjoyed it too. We had gotten so caught up in the heat of the moment.

    I stood up and hurried over to grab my clothes. When I turned around, my gaze fell on Edward. "Perfect," I murmured. He was so ****ing sexy.

    Edward caught me staring at him. Quickly, I turned away, my cheeks burning in embarrassment. "We… uhh… probably should get going," I stuttered.

    Edward hastily slid into his clothes and glanced outside. "Yes, we should. The demons are coming."

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    I didn't put "DETAILS, DETAILS, DETAILS!" because if I did, the thread might get locked. 
     
  12. Once again you have scarred my pure little innocent mind...
    I may now live tarnished forever!
    Lol, looved it! 
     
  13. You'd better be sorry Sophia..
    Lolol. 
     
  14. Heh… 

    Ꭲhe Ꮀallen Ꭿngel
     
  15. I'm sorry, ok?! I made her do it!

    Anyways, an update for you all...

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    Edward's POV

    I hurriedly pulled my clothes on as Lydia did the same. I couldn't get last night out of my head. So much passion, I wasn't used to it. And, damn, that girl was so ****ing sexy...

    I snapped myself out of the fantasies I was having, then looked over my shoulder to check on Lydia. She was ready. "Right," I said "We need supplies. If we can gather enough for a few days then we should hide from them, in a highly populated location, like the city. It will be harder for them to find us there."

    Lydia nodded. I crept over to the door, checking to see if there were any Demons outside. The door slowly creaked open, light flooding in through the cracks. I poked my head out of the gap I had created, looking around. No sign of anyone. Good. Something flickered in front of my face. My eyes met two black, souless, disorientated ones. I heard a voice shout, recognising it as mine. It seemed to take forever for my brain to realise that there was a Demon right in front of me.

    I jumped back, quickly slamming the door shut, but not before I had seen the grotesque smirk on that creature's gnarled, mangled face.

    "They've surrounded us," I whispered to Lydia. "If we stay as quiet as possible, while we come up with something, they might think we've gone away.". It wasn't ideal, but it was worth a shot, since nobody had any better ideas at the minute.

    Lydia paced up and down the old barn aimlessly. Suddenly she stopped. "Shh!" she whispered. "But I didn't say any-" I was cut off by another "Shh!"
    Lydia crept slowly over to the bales of hay in the corner of the barn. I followed, determined to keep her safe. "I think I hear breathing," she said curiously. "Be careful, ok?" I said. She stopped, then began to stare. I rushed to her side to see what she was looking at. "Oh my word..." I breathed.

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    MUHAHAHAHA!! Cliffhanger!! And again, I am sincerely sorry for it was moi idea to add the sex. Again, sorry On a brighter note, I've gone hyper! Hahahaha, it's 10:40PM and I should be sleeping...  Major drama!
     
  16. Oh. Whoops. I forgot.

    -Sophia
     
  17. Great update!!

    Ꭲhe Ꮀallen Ꭿngel
     
  18. Sophia your cliffhangers are so grr to me
     
  19. Haha Well, night guys I'm gonna go to bed (it's 11:26PM) and I'm guessing I'll be dreaming about sexy Edward Dracula... I am now the ultimate fangirl! *screams then faints*

    -Sophia