The 13th floor

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Simply_Fox (01), Oct 18, 2011.

  1. -I peek at the screen. It's over showing a motor bike sitting idly on the lake-
     
  2. "I dunno,But it hurts too."
    -She faces the ground-
     
  3. -I gently kiss her head before looking back at the screen-
     
  4. -I blush and lay my hand palm up on the arm rest. -
     
  5. -I place my hand in hers-
     
  6. -I glance at him before faking interest at the screen-
     
  7. -I turn to her and smile-

    "Normally I wouldn't be having fun but since I'm with you I am."
     
  8. -I blush at him comment. -

    Normally I'd come alone
     
  9. -I smile-

    "It's better with someone else."
     
  10. Ya so you can have some one to look at during the creepy parts

    -I look at him as a dog is devoured.-

    (hated that part)
     
  11. -I look into her eyes ignoring the screen-

    (....)
     
  12. (they threw the dog into the water in a cage... I screamed at the screen towa cried...)

    -I notice his semi intense gaze. I could read his thoughts but I've blocked all emotion since we are in public-
     
  13. -As I look into her eyes I realize how beautiful she is. For so many years I only thought of her as a friend. But now there's more-
     
  14. -I ignore the girl crying in front of me and lean in cautiously-
     
  15. -I slowly lean in with her-
     
  16. -I kiss him softly for a second and pull away smiling-
     
  17. -As our lips meet tingles shoot through my body. I open my eyes as she pulls away looking into hers. I'm at a loss for words-
     
  18. Like I said it's better when some one goes with you
     
  19. -I nod still lingering on the kiss-

    "Yea...."