Tear of Every Drop of Rain

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by RaychelElla, Jan 22, 2012.

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  2. She want this bumped 
     
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  4. Ted POV

    It's was around 7 o'clock when BB and I finally finished.

    "There all done." I smiled. "Looks good." Ted said. "Good? No no no it's marvelous not good. More like fantástico. Brooke started to laugh. A laugh that I actually like.She was so cute. Plus I felt bad for her, you having a dead boyfriend

    "Well it's getting late, you should go now." I said. I just wanted think about feelings. "See you at school tomorrow." Brooke said with a smile.

    I locked the door after she left. I wondering how Ariana doing? Just I was about to head into the kitchen my iPhone started ringing. It was Ariana.

    "Hey Teddy bear." she said seductively. Such a dhore.
    Hey how's it going?" I said .
    "Nothing boo. I was thinking of you during your boring project..."Ariana was trailing off. She always trails off when something. "And what? Are you okay?"I said strongly.
    "Can I come over your house like now?" she asked. "Uh Ariana I don't k-." Please I'm legit in a bad mood."

    "My parents aren't home so sure why not." I said. I was little nervous. With Ariana you never gonna know what's going to happen. "Thanks. I'm coming over now"she said like she just won the battle. She hang up.

    "What the dell did I just get myself in."
     
  5. Not Bad Raychel  Bump 
     
  6. I will be tomorrow
     
  7. Brooke POV

    I soon I got home I went directly up to room. The project with Ted was just plain weird.

    But now that's in past just like Caleb. I should really stop thinking about it. I can't help it. I was PIMD, a fun little game but too many rules for it.()

    My phone beep and I got a text from Ava.I decided to call her instead. "Hey Ted and I finished our project" I said. "Really?! Did he tried to pull a move on you?! she said.

    Ava sounded really excited but don't know why. "What? No. I'm going to say this very slowly. Ted or Teddy Tanner has little guidette girlfriend named Ariana." I said bravely.

    "Yeah. Whatever. But guess what?" she said excitedly. "What?" What she probably going to was going to be extremely boring. "I heard there a new boy at your school who's amazingly hot." Ava was really squeaking.

    "Even hotter than Tanner?" I was laughing. "It's not funny. And yes he is. Listen I gotta go. Bye."she said.

    I looked at my iPod screen. Then into the night-sky.

    I wonder what's life for Ted Tanner. But I shook it off. Ted was playa. Whenever he got bored he would dump the girl he's with and go out with a new one.

    There's is no way Ted would like a girl like me.
     
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  9. I'll promise I'll update today
     
  10. Brooke POV

    A new day. A new attitude. I did my usually routine get ready for school and have a conversation with mother.

    My mother is the only family I got. My father died of a terrible sickness.

    I walked downstairs and saw my mom. She was eating blueberries pancakes. "Good morning sweetie. How are you?" she asked with a smile on her face.

    "I'm good. Just a little be tired." I said. The only things that made my mother happy was me and her boyfriend Bill. "Well I got a exciting news. Bill and I are getting married!" she was squealing with joy.

    Me. Not so much. I mean like the guy is fine but I liked better it's just my mom and I. Whenever she around him she seem like she under a spell.

    "WHAT? How could you do this me?!"I said. I was wicked furious.


    Ava POV(it's about time)

    I wonder how's Brooke doing. I haven't heard from her in a while.

    I checked my cell phone again. Brooke was never late. She always picks me and drop at school.

    I go to a Catholic school. She goes to a public school.

    All of sudden an '8 Corvette pulled up. "Do you need lift? Oh wait I've seen you before." I nodded my head. It was the new kid at Brooke's school.

    Did I mention he was super cute up close. "So did you did a ride or what?"he said. Oh god he has the most cutest dimples I've ever seen.

    "Sure. Why not."
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    Whoosh. Whoosh. Did u liked Ava POV or Brooke's?
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  11. Jacob's (new guy) POV

    I was minding my own business. You know heading to school then Bam.

    I saw a pretty girl who was walking. Why not offer a ride. "Hey do you need a lift? Oh wait I've seen you before." I said curiously. She looked so familiar.

    She nodded her head. She still hasn't reply on my question. " So did you need a ride or what?" I said again.

    She got into my car and just sat there quietly. I decided to break the silence. "Are you going to that private school around the corner?I asked.

    "Yeah. Thanks for the ride too. Well here's my stop bye." she said quietly. "Wait you didn't tell me your name stranger?" I smiled. " Ava." she said it like it was greatest name ever.

    "Jacob is my name." I said. I could hear bells off in the distant. "Well bye now."she squealed.

    I just around the town because school didn't start in a half hour.

    I stopped when I arrived at my destination. I finally made it here. I pulled out my Advil and smiled.

    "I can finally have a new friends, new relationship but I can finally have a new life. I can put the past behind me now." I whispered.