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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *applered123 (01), Jul 2, 2013.
Thank u eldriel...
Jack: Finishes the stairs "Hey girl."
Tess:-sees jack-um-walks over to Lyra-
Red: What took you so long. *lifts her arms up* Carry me Eldriel: Yeah...
Kisses her cheek-
Eldriel: -smiles- you can let me go now...
Lets go- now we gotta find a way to survive...
Eldriel: Just us? -looks at Ark- Wolfe there as well.
Tess:-watches jack-
All of us. We have to find our own food,our own hideout...were on our own now
-sees Tess and runs as fast as I can-
Tess:-yells after her-I'm friendly
-yells back- I'D RATHER NOT TALK
Tess:-laughs-you don't have to yell-walks back to the base-
- turns back to the 36 floor building and salutes- good luck sir...
-continues to run to a separate building-
-sits down in grass and watches jack-
-scales separate building and jumps onto roof, all of a sudden starts crying-
(*Tess
Eldriel: Right -smiles-