story:Zombieland

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CyBeRxANARCHY (01), Mar 16, 2011.

  1. Sorry for the people I disappointed today because of no story. Too much hework will try to write one timmorrow
     
  2. me want to b on story :3
     
  3. Me! I wanna be in!
     
  4. Should I make a comment thread or should I not. Out ur thoughts on now and will tally them before I start writing the next section
     
  5. I think it'd be a good idea! 
     
  6. yeah u should
     
  7. Ok I will add a comment thread to this since it is a 2:0 win
     
  8. When we left the store, we left Bela and Chew there so they can be taught by some of the greatest from our original group. Here is what has happened

    Cabellas

    Bela was practicing her aim with a bow that she really liked. Se found out that some of the tips were explosive. So Vharlie decided yo show bela the archery range they created. " What was the original club like?" she asked between shots.
    "At first we stayed in our dorms practicing on Call Of Duty Nazi Zombies. But when the zombie population was huge. We had to go to the club meeting area for a long time. We would always stay together looking for new people to make the group bigger. But we kept losing people on food runs and recruiting jobs. So Cyber decided it was best for me and my partner to stay here while he and Captian looked for more people to help us survive." he said as he walked around the small area, and helping her form. Thud. The arrow hit the middle of the board. "oh" she said, not knowing how to respond after hearing what has happened.
    "How did u get in the group" Charlie asked, while helping her form again. "Well. Me ad my friend were running from a small group of zombies and we were cornered. We didn't know what to do besides scream. Then, Captian came and he completely destroyed them and told us to follow him. As we did more zombies came and he still held them off. My friend then tripped on Apoc's sacred tree and a group of zombies completely devoured her. Captian just kept pulling me away and finially got me to safety and I then met everyone and now I'm here." she said fixit her form and hitting bullseyes everytime. Now it was Charlies turn to reply with "oh" since he too didn't know how else to respond to that. He never really seen a friend get eaten by a zombie. So far he has been lucky and he knew it. Then there was a very rapid bang on the door.
     
  9. At the same time Charlie and bela were talking Chew and Andi were aldo gettung to know each other.

    "How much ammo do u guys get." Chew says looking at all the guns and the ammo vases that are under the counter. "A good amount each week. Since we still order the company doesn't worry about money and gives it to us for free. They do it because they have been apart of PIMD before and didn't mind helping out some students."Andi replies, while she checksthe scopes of the guns. She then proceeds to add a silencer to them and shoot a target 250 feet away. She then adjusts the sights and does it for all te guns. "Why is the target so far away" Chew asked inquisitively, while walking towards the mold of a zombie or what seems like a mold. "Because it is safe zombie distance and that, my young friend, is a real zombie" she says. And with that last piece, Chew jumps back with suprised and disgust of the zombie and it's features. He couldn't help what he wad about to ask. He had feeling for her and wasn't sure if she had feelings for him. "Hey, Andi. I was just wondering...Uhm if u were... Uhm kindof.." he starts to say. "Yes I am single and sure I wouldn't mind being ur girlfriend." she says interrupting him. "Really!" he says with delight in his voice. "Yea sure, why not." she replies and them smiles at him he was walking to her when something out the window caught his attention. He must of stared to long because just then a man person appeared and was rapidly banding on the door and was looking despirate for shelter. Chew and Andi saw what was behind the person and Andi ran straight to the Assualt Rifle section. Right behind the person were a good size group of zombies for one man to defend against. He then wondered if they would hold them off for them to be safe. Or would they die trying.
     
  10. That's it for now goodnight everyone. I am shot
     
  11. What's gonna happen?!??!
     
  12. I'm impatient. Tell me now.
     
  13. Can't doing homework will rite before I go to bed don't worry
     
  14. "Andi throw me a Cammando and a Mini Uzi!" Chew yells to Andi while she was running to get the guns. "Y the Cammando?" she asked Chew while he was opening the door for the scared man. "You know u suck with it" Andi continues. "I know but Epic here is amazing with one." Chew answers and Andi then throws the Cammando to Epic and an Uzi to Chew. Just then, Bela and Charlie turn the corner. Epic, man it's great to see that you are still alive." Charlie yells to Epic while grabbing an AUG. "thanks Charlie" Epic fires back, while reloading his gun. Then he opened the door and procceded to fire the whole clip into the first row of zombies. When he is finished his first clip he moves away while Charlie shot an entire clip of an Uzi into the zombie horde. He then steps away to reload while Andi fires her dual mag AK47 and Bela shooting some of her explosive tip arrows in the middle of the horde. They seem to have a good strategy but more and more zombies piled on to the horde. They seemed to be holding off well until Andi noticed that they were gradually getting closer. She knew it couldn't be good.
     
  15. I could give u a little sneak peak of what I am thinking
     
  16. Ah shit wrong thread
     
  17. THE STORE


    We were holding off bad. We started strong and then lost it. It started when we were shooting and someone shot the doors (which were made of glass). Now we had tondegend twice as hard. Then some one threw a grenade and completely missed the horde. Note to self if we make it out alive, I will teach EVERYONE how to aim (exept captian). Now here we are trying to hold th back as we are all running low on ammo and the horde is not only growing but getting faster. Then, they all stop. We then stopped. "Whats going on" Talyor Asked. "SSHH. Keep quiet so they don't go back to trying to eat us all." I said quiet enough for th not to stir. Then we hear cries of pain and death. Then we see some fall infront of us. He runs to us with an Galil and seperating the zombies on both sides of him. "Who is that guy" Talyor asked. " I don't know nor care. Just shoot the zombies while we can. And that's what we and the mysterious guy do.