Mel's Review Station Story: Story Time! Written by: Royal and Qin Extra Information: Extremely well formatted. Sadly only got up to part 4 since it has taken me so long to get to it. Originality~ The idea is beautiful and is taken great care with, I have not read or heard many if not at all things like it. The Spanish added a nice touch and made me feel like you guys really cared about this story. Interest~ In simple terms you got me hooked, still a bit shaky now and then with the writing where I was kinda confused but it made perfect sense once I worked it out. I never lost intreats at all which is really saying something for a person like me. The references made where cute and added a nice touch. Characters~ I didn't get that much far into your story but I had a general sense about the characters and their relationships. I found the mother to put a smile on my face and the playful jokes the two mains would think of was well done. Grammar~ A couple but not many tiny mistakes here and there. The dialect and description was exceptional but with a few more experimental wording could blow my mind. It was exceptionally formatted with the pages and lettering effects. Summary Review~ Strong recommendation if you want great quality chapters with an interesting story. I hope I can get to read more of it.