story time! 

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lindsey1414

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Hey i'm sorry if u think this is a pointless thread, but i wants all of your oppinions. I am writting a story and i want to know what u think. It's called the afterlife, and it's about a girl who dies, and her parents are struggling with it, and the girl is just looking back on her life and realizing how many things she did wrong.

If u like it yay!
If u don't...well, nothing i can do. Haters gunna hate, and potatos gunna potate.
 
Here is the prolog:

Life was good. It was a beautiful day, and there I was, just walking home from school, with no worries. No, life wasn't good, it was perfect. I had everything I could have ever wanted. I never wanted anything to change. Well, sometimes even I don't get what I want, and just about EVERYTHING changed the day of the accident. I was crossing the street, and some drunk comes barreling down the street. BAM! I was hit. I couldn't move, and the only thing I could see was blood. Then, my world went black. I saw a bright light, and I knew I was dying. My whole life flashed before me, and I realized what a horrible person I was.
 
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