Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. Peyton's point of view:

    *~*~*Monday(bumbumbummmmm)*~*~*

    I walked into the school with Garrett and Brianna and everyone grew quiet. It had been a few days since I had been at school and I had also heard a rumor that Logan had started saying that he beat the shit out of me and that's why I hadn't been at school.
    I was really tired of his ass. I walked down the hall wearing my Neshoba Central Baseball shirt and Neshoba Central Baseball shorts. I didn't care about my appearance much today but all the girls still had that damn I would fuck him look on their faces.
    I shrugged everybody's stares off and walked to where Logan was. His back was towards me and I heard him saying,"I'm gonna beat that mother ****ers mother ****ing ass. I swear that bastard is gonna regret everything."
    I was right behind him and said,"Then hit me you damn mother ****er."
    He jumped and turned around quickly and the look on his face showed that he was clearly po'd at me.
    But you know what? I didn't give a mother ****ing damn if he was po'd at me or not.
    He just kept looking at me and that made me mad. I got in his face and in a hushed growl I said,"You're not even worth getting the shit knocked out of you by me. Stop acting like damn mother ****ing spoiled brat and be a damn man you damn pansy."
    I saw his hands go into a fist and mine automatically did the same thing. He just stared at me with hatred in his eyes and his jaw locked. I felt a hand on my shoulder and turned around and saw that new guy Zeke. He nodded at me as if to say he had my back. It felt good to actually know I still had at least one friend who wouldn't completely betray me even though Zeke and I really didn't know much about each other.
    I turned back to Logan,"Well whats it gonna be bitch? We duke it out right here or just let all this die?"
     
  2. Ok y'all I want y'all to go back to the beginning of this story and read to like page 11 or so and see just how much Peyton has changed and also notice that Peyton and Kate both say that they will love each other forever and that Kate still has the promise ring Peyton gave her *hint hint*
     
  3. First now Peyton is a freaking BADASS!!!
     
  4. I'm gonna read it again!
     
  5. Haha I know right Zeke! I told you you were coming into play soon lol did y'all read from the beginning to like page 11 or so and see how much Peyton has changed?
     
  6. Hey new reader!! Yay!!!
     
  7. I said just shoot the idiot
     
  8. I didnt!  i dont even have to read to know hes BADASS!
     
  9. Oh and YAY ME!! Can i falcon punch Logan
     
  10. Ally you're not reading the whole story again are you?
     
  11. YAAY He didnt punch him right away Peytons the bigger man he tried to stay peaceful i wonder wat logan will do
     
  12. I think there could be a fight a brewing lol who all did what I said and went back to the beginning to see how much Peyt has changed and the promise he made to Kate
     
  13. Did u read the whole story over ally lol
     
  14. Thanks y'all for bumping. Idk if I'll be able to update today but I will try
     
  15. Sorry for not updating yall
     
  16. I have an update!!!!!
     
  17. Here's your update!!!

    Warning: Some scenes that have been described might be too much for younger readers. Discretion is advised. 


    Peyton's point of view:

    Quiet.
    Stillness.

    That's how the hallways of my school were like at that moment. Deathly quiet. I had just called Logan out and it was obvious he didn't like it one bit.
    We all stood there for 15 minutes and he still didnt say anything so I took a step back and turned around and started walking away with Zeke right in front of me.
    I had gotten a little distance away when I heard running and then I heard Logan shout at me,"FUCK YOU BASTARD!"
    I turned around quickly and right when I did I felt this sharp shooting pain in my stomach.
    I heard girls scream and saw my brother and Zeke lunge at Logan. I tried to help them but I just......I just started falling.
    Before I hit the floor I saw what looked like blood on the floor and the last thought that ran through my mind was.....









    I'm going to die.
     
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