Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. What should Peyton do?!?!
     
  2. Alright I'm at my state competition y'all so tell me what y'all think Peyton might or will do
     
  3. He will kill his father and then turn into a vampire. 
     
  4. He should get the girl he loves :)
     
  5. I hope he gets back with Kate eventually the only way he should move on is if she dies and takes his hand and tells him to be with the girl he loves or something along those lines
     
  6. Alright I'm writing an update so you can expect it sometime tomorrow.
     
  7. I finally have an update. Some of you will probably get ticked off at Peyt.





    Peyton's point of view:

    Dad and I rode in silence and I had no idea what to ****ing say to him. I mean come on what are you supposed to tell the dad who you thought was your real dad for like your whole life only to find out that he wasn't your dad? I mean seriously how do you do that ****ing shit cause I would damn well like to know.

    He pulled in the gate of Neshoba and I was completely lost as hell as to what we were doing at this god-forsaken school. I looked over at dad but he had already turned the engine off and was getting out of the car.
    I got out and said,"Dad where are we going?"
    He ignored me and just said,"Come on."
    I paused before I followed him. Everything felt so awkward right now. We got to the front of the school and dad banged on the door and a guard came out and they talked a bit and dad motioned me in and stooped right in front of my old anatomy teachers room and told me that this is where he fought my real dad trying to protect my mom.
    I was in awe that even back then my dad was my mom's protector. I could feel the color drain from my face as my dad was telling me all about what happened between him and my real dad. At that moment I could feel myself lose so much respect for my real dad.
    He lead me around the school a little more and got to the courtyard and hearing my dad tell me everything that happened just completely floored me.
    We finally got back to the car and he stopped and told me that right where we were standing was where he proposed to mom. I couldn't believe that he remembered all this.

    How can two people love each other that much? To risk everything to try to be together even if some of their friends said it would never work out?

    Then my dad asked me,"Do you want to go home to Georgia with me or stay with your dad Jerame?"

    I didn't know what to say but I didn't know that if I said I wanted to live somewhere else I would get too but I didn't want to because I still had to be honest with three girls in Georgia and I honest to God loved all three of them in some way. I looked at dad and said,"I want to go home. To Georgia."
     
  8. AWESOME i think he made the right choice he needs to go home.
     
  9. So what do yall think about Peyton and his decision???
     
  10. I would do it too
     
  11. Anybody else want to say what they think about Peyt's decision
     
  12. He made a good decision!!
     
  13. I wanted him to make that decision anyway.
     
  14. bump!!!!!!! 






     
  15. So turns out I'm sick:( I'll try to write some
     
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