Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. Kate's point of view:

    Peyton looked at me and brought me over to his parents,"Can I please stay here?"

    His parents looked at us and his mom said,"I'm sorry sweetie but you can't."

    His mom got in the vehicle and his brother and sister came out of the house and got in the vehicle as well and his dad looked at us and said,"You two can always visit each other. Now come on Peyton say goodbye to your girlfriend. We gotta go."

    With that his dad got in the vehicle and waited. Peyton turned to me and held me tight and whispered,"I love you Kate. I promise to call you every night."

    I kissed Peyton on the cheek and said,"I love you too Peyton. You better call me every night."
    He smiled at me and kissed me and said,"Goodbye Kate."
    He got in the vehicle and while they were driving off I softly whispered,"Goodbye Peyton."
     
  2. awwww.... bump!!!!!



     
  3. Peyton's point of view:

    4 hours. 4 hours of riding in the truck with my family following the moving truck in front of us. 4 hours that could have been spent with Kate completely wasted.
    I looked out the window. This was gonna be a long trip.




    Garrett's point of view:

    Why do we have to move...again? Do they like moving us around so da*n much?
    I looked over at Peyton who was looking out the window. He's probably thinking about Kate. There's no way they can make a long-distance relationship work.
    I sighed and lay my head back and turned on my iPod and closed my eyes. Only about 6 more hours to go. Fu*king joy.




    Brianna's point of view:

    Moving again. You'd think we would be used to it now but we're not. Always moving around from place to place every year or so gets old fast.

    I looked at Peyton who was looking out the window then I looked at Garrett who was listening to his iPod.
    Yep. This is usually how it goes whenever we have to move again. Only 6 more hours of this to go..
     
  4. I apologize that it wasn't a good update I was a little rushed but lemme know what you think about the characters
     
  5. Bummmp!! It was good!!
     
  6. Kate's point of view:

    I watched them as they drove away. There goes my world. I sighed. All I wanted to do now was go home and cry some more because I missed him. I got in my car and I got a text from Peyton:
    I know I may be gone for now but I left you a little present in your room. It's actually a three part present. The first part is very obvious but the other two you will find slowly. Happy hunting Kate:) I love you.
    -love Peyton

    I smiled. He always did this especially if he was going somewhere. I drove home quickly and went upstairs to my room and saw that my whole bed was covered in pink roses. They were my favorite and Peyton knew that.
    I walked over to my bed and looked at all the roses. He was absolutely the best. I looked to the side and saw a note from Peyton:
    Congrats on finding part one of your three part present Kate. It's one rose for every day that we have been a couple. I'll love you until the last rose dies.
    -love Your Peyton

    I started to cry. These were the things I was going to miss. I got my phone out and texted Peyton:
    Peyton you are the absolute sweetest. I love that you did this but more importantly I love you. I'll always love you.
    -Love Kate

    Peyton text back:
    I'm sweet because I still constantly try to impress you. I love you too Kate and I will always love you too.
    -love Peyton

    I smiled. He was awesome. I took a picture of my bed and the note and put it up on Facebook.
    The caption underneath the picture of the note said:
    I believe my boyfriend is the greatest in the world. Not a lot of guys would write a note like this. I love you Peyton.

    As soon as I uploaded that one I got the picture of my bed. The caption underneath it said:
    This was my present from Peyton after he left.:) a rose for everyday we've been a couple:) I love him.

    After I uploaded that one I decided to go see my friend Julie. I knew she would continue to cheer me up everyday since Peyton was gone.
     
  7. bump!!!!!! awww.... 



     
  8. Sorry about all the updating only once I've been uber busy
     
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