Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1.  but i thought in teh other story tht the baby died when Holly get pregnant at the age 13!!?
     
  2. Yes but when she was 17 she got pregnant again by we don't know yet and then Peyton came into the world 9 months later after holly and zack were married for a month and Now Peyton is trying to find out who his real dad is
     
  3. Oh!!! I didnt read the whole story i waz to lazyyyyyy!!
     
  4. Lol you should read the whole story lol
     
  5. Mm you dont say
     
  6. I READ DA WHOLE STORY!!!!!!!!
     
  7. bump!!!!!!!! 





     
  8. Got an awesome idea for an update this morning and it's been playing over and over in my mind all day at school. Y'all will die of laughter at Peyton. LolXD
     
  9. Peyton's point of view:

    The door opened and my heart stopped. I couldn't believe how obvious it was that he was my dad.
    I couldn't speak. It was like I was too nervous to speak. My dad looked at me and said,"What do you want kid?"
    I shook my head still a little nervous and took a deep breath,"I....um....I'm looking for my....um.....dad....my real dad and...I...I think you're my......my real dad."
    He looked me up and down and said,"How old are you kid?"
    I quickly said,"17. I'll be 18 April 21."
    His eyes widened and he started growing pale and he whispered,"Who's your mom."
    I look at him a little worried and said,"Holly McGee. Her maiden name is Holly Stevens."
    He grew paler and said,"Shit. You're my kid?"
    I nodded and unfolded my birth records,"It says my real dad is Jerame Coats and I'm guessing that it's you."
    I handed him the birth records and he just stared at them like they were written in some kind of foreign language and he finally nodded,"Yeah. I'm your dad."

    We stood outside a few minutes longer and the atmosphere was....well....awkward. Jerame looked at me with a hint of confusion still on his face and said,"You know what why don't you come in so we can both make sense of this."
    I nodded. I didnt know what to say I mean here I am face to face with my real dad who I didn't know about for 17 almost 18 years.

    We walked in the house and it was a really nice house. I could see that it wasn't just him living here since there were pictures of him and some woman and a little girl. Every picture I looked had him and that woman and girl in it and then it was just him and the girl and the girl looked strangely familiar.
    Jerame cleared his throat and I turned around and saw him holding out a beer to me. I took it and opened it and took a big swig. At times like this you need a little something extra to help you get through.
    I sat on the couch and Jerame sat in one of the chairs and he leaned back,"What do you want to know Peyton?"
    I thought for a minute and said,"I want to know why you didn't want to be my dad."
    His expression was hurt and he leaned forward and looked me straight in the eyes,"Peyton I wanted to be your dad. Trust me I did. But Zack, the guy who has been your dad, didn't want me in your life and neither did your mom."
    I didn't know what to say I was confused. Why didn't mom and dad want him in my life?
    It seemed like he could read my thoughts because he said,"Your mom and dad didn't want me around because of something that happened years ago. I can see why they didn't want me in your life now but then I was angry at both of them. I hated Zack with every fiber of my being and I didn't want him to be your father. To watch you grow up. That was supposed to be me. I'm sorry for not trying to be the dad I was supposed to be Peyton but I also had a family of my own to take care of and still do. My daughter is 16 so I always have people keeping an eye on her for me so I won't lose her like I did her mom."
    I nodded trying to take all of this in. I would have to ask my mom about what happened when I saw her again but right now I wanted to spend time with my dad. I looked up at Jerame and said,"Do you think I could stay here for a while?"
    He laughed and nodded,"Yeah kid you can stay. You're my son after all."
    I smiled weakly and took another sip of the beer.

    Three hours went by and Jerame and I talked about everything that has happened to me from the time I could remember to now. He seemed impressed that I was playing baseball and soccer and running track and he even told me he had done all of those sports when he was in high school. I thought that was pretty cool myself.
    We were still talking when I heard the door open and I saw a girl who I assumed was his daughter and I froze.
    We both looked at each other and she said,"Holy ****ing shit."
     
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