Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. I don't care, I just want an update
     
  2. Really and truly I'm sure these kids hear cuss words at some point during the day.


    I will update tomorrow. I really have to work on my research paper.
     
  3. I love this story, i dont care what people say.! 
     
  4. You will get silenced no matter what Holly. You bypassed, and this thread might get locked
     
  5. One I wasn't cussing with those stars. I was putting them there so the reader could put whatever they wanted in there and I was putting what I wanted in there. Don't accuse me of things if you don't know how I do things
     
  6. I'm not accusing you of shit. It will be. A pain in the ass to explain all of it to mod, wouldn't it? Just type out the whole word, don't make it harder than it already is. :) I dun' mean to be bossy, just trying to be helpful.
    ~") MannionMustang
     
  7. Alright y'all tell me what y'all think so far while I write my research paper and the next update lol
     
  8. Y'all I'm so sorry but I wont be able to update tonight. I'm still working on my research paper and it's very stressful. I'm so sorry. Please be patient with me and hopefully tomorrow I'll have an update. Again I'm so sorry
     
  9. Ok y'all I feel bad for not being able to update so I will try my hardest to update and I will try not to bypass because I really don't want this story locked since I've put more effort into this one than my other one and I will also ask my lovely readers to please not bypass either. I honestly didn't know it was against the rules until I read. Even smart people have their dumb moments lol. But anywho I will try my hardest to update today, do my research paper, and babysit....at the same time lol I like a frikin awesome ninja with a cool tiger lol

    Love y'all bunches
     
  10. Time for an update. If it doesn't put stars on the cuss words I spelled out I will repost with the stars
     
  11. Peyton's point of view:

    It was finally the end of the school day. Thank God. It's not that I don't like school it's just that it gets boring with the same old teachers, the same old lectures, and the same old students. I was tired of hearing everybody's drama.
    Especially girl drama.

    I swear if I hear that some guy who was dating her but slept with another while he was with her and then slept with a totally different girl and now both the girls he slept with are probably pregnant I'm going to shoot myself.
    I mean damn. If he cheated break up with his sorry ass but don't tell everybody about your stupid sex life.

    I walked to my car and unlocked it and got in and waited for my brother and sister. While I was waiting I rolled down my windows and pulled out my cigarettes. I hadn't smoked in about a week but after having to hear about everybody's stupid drama I think I deserved a little nicotine in my system.
    I put a cigarette in my mouth and started looking for my lighter. Great. Just fucking great. My lighter was nowhere. What good is a cigarette without a fucking lighter.
    I put the cigarette back in the box and laid my seat back. I might as well close my eyes for a bit while I wait. At that moment I heard something that sounded like somebody hitting the hood of my car. I jumped up and saw that it was my brother. Stupid idiot. He knows better than to hit my car.
    I unlocked the doors and Garrett and Brianna got in. I looked at Garrett,"Do you know where my lighter is?"
    Garrett smirked and put his hands behind his head,"Yeah I took it out."
    I was po'd now,"Dude I need my damn lighter so I can have a cigarette."
    He shrugged his shoulders,"Sorry man. No can do. I'm trying to help your ass quit. Now drive."
    I rolled my eyes still po'd and started driving home. I wanted my lighter.
    I finally got us home and Garrett looked at me and Brianna,"Y'all ready to find the big surprise?"
    Bri and I both nodded and I killed the ignition and got my stuff out of the trunk and waited for them to get their stuff and we walked in to the biggest surprise of our lives.
     
  12. I must say not the most intersting updates of alll.....
     
  13. Just ****ing great*
    without a ****ing lighter*
     
  14. I'm trying to get it rolling again
     
  15. Oh ok!
     
  16. Ignore the tounge
     
  17. HOW DARE YOU!!!!

    UPDATE!
     
  18. How dare who lol
     
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