Such a great story! I love how you describe the characters . In my opinion, i think peyton should be with kate. And i don't like how your readers rush you for updates and longer posts. Its quality not quantity! You have a life outside of pimd and they should know that. So take your time and update whenever you feel like it
Thanks I'm probably gonna start trying to take weekends off so I can regather my thoughts about the story
Logan's point of view: The rest of the school day I just zoned out on everything that the teachers said. I didn't care what they said. They all annoyed me. The final bell rang and I went to the music room to wait for Taylor. I walked around and looked at all the instruments and saw a guitar and picked it up. I hadn't played a guitar in three years so I figured I would be a little rusty. I started playing Eye of the Tiger because well it was a beast song. When I got to the chorus I messed up a bit but I kept going. It felt good to play again. I finished up the chorus and decided to stop there and I got up and put the guitar back where I found it. I turned around and I was startled by Taylor who was standing there surprisingly quiet. She kept looking at me and I sighed,"Why did you want to talk with me?" She walked towards me and when she was a few feet away from me she said,"I need your help getting Madison with the new guy Zeke so I can be with Peyton again." I scoffed,"Why do you want to be with Peyton?" The look on her face was like shut up you little prick and let me finish. I cleared my throat at the awkward feeling in the room now. Taylor gave an annoyed sigh and said,"I want to be with Peyton because I still love him. He's sweet, athletic, a great guitar player, a great singer, he's honest, and he puts others before himself." I rolled my eyes and was about to say something when Taylor spoke up again,"You know you could learn something from Peyton if you would just stop trying to act like you are better than him. Newsflash Logan. You aren't better than Peyton. If anything, Peyton is better than you." I stared at Taylor completely shocked and a little hurt that she would even say that to me of all people. I mean come on I was Logan. The guy every girl wanted to fu*k with and if I wouldn't fu*k with some girls they would usually go around the whole school and said they did which didn't bother me. Taylor was about to walk away when I lunged for her. I grabbed her by her hair and p*mp slapped that bi*ch. She looked at me completely shocked and afraid. I got in her face and said in a hushed angry voice,"I swear to god if you ever say some stupid sh*t like that I will beat the fu*king sh*t out of you bi*ch. And from now on you do what I say when I say it! You got that! You're my fu*king bi*ch so get you damn a*s used to it." I didn't wait for her to reply. I just simply threw her on the ground and walked out. I have had enough of Peyton. His sorry mother fu*king a*s was going down. Permanently.