Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. Writing an update idk if it'll be posted tonight or tomorrow
     
  2. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! And FLUBBER should save someone's life like shove them out of the way of a bus or something
     
  3. Update tomorrow
     
  4. -secret reader says: BUMP!-
    -secret reader out-
     
  5. Garrett's point of view:

    I heard Peyton drive up and I knew he was probably gonna get his a*s chewed out for coming home at midnight. This was gonna be good.
    I went downstairs carefully and got to the kitchen door and listened in on their conversation. I knew it was wrong but I had to know what they were talking about.
    Standing there listening to them argue about Peyton enlisting....wait! Peyton wants to enlist!! H*ll no! There's no way in h*ll dad would let Peyton enlist especially if he wouldn't let me try to enlist once I turned 17.
    I heard dad get up so I moved out of the way so he wouldn't see me. As soon as he got upstairs I went into the kitchen where Peyton was,"Hey man. Heard you and dad fighting again."
    Peyton just nodded,"Dad is being deployed in a month and I want to go with him."
    I stood there shocked. There was no way they were gonna send dad away again so soon,"Peyton I agree with dad. You don't need to go and enlist. What about Kate or Madison or Keeley or Taylor? How would they feel if you enlisted? You are in love with four girls and even though you say you don't love Taylor I know you do I mean she was one girl you wanted to go all the way with but you two broke it off."
    Peyton shook his head,"I don't....love Taylor."
    I laughed,"Dude yes you do and Now you have a critical choice to make. Keeley, Madison, or Taylor?"
    I got up and left Peyton sitting there to think about this. I went upstairs and grabbed my bass and just started playing.
     
  6. bump!!!! 




     
  7. Peyton's point of view:

    Did I love Taylor? Nah there was no way. I was in love with Madison....or Keeley....or Kate.....or maybe Taylor...I don't know who I am in love with.
    I walked back upstairs and got in my room and laid down on my bed. I was exhausted and sleep was the only thing I needed right now but thoughts of who I could be in love with filled my mind.
    I finally drifted off to sleep thinking of Madison and Taylor and Keeley.....

    *~*~*~*~*DREAM*~*~*~*~*
    I was standing at the end of a long hallway. It kinda looked like a church but then again it didn't.
    I saw three girls all in white and I felt drawn to each of them. It was weird because no other made me feel drawn to them except Kate and Kate wasn't in that group of girls in white.
    I looked closely at each girl and saw that it was Keeley, Madison, and Taylor. Keeley was my best friend and the only girl I ever went all the way with. Madison was the girl I dated before I left for Mississippi and Taylor was the girl I dated for six months before Madison came.
    What the h*ll?!

    *~*~*~*~*REALITY*~*~*~*~*

    I jolted awake and I felt like my heart was racing. I couldn't believe I had a dream about all three of them..
     
  8. Taylor's point of view:

    I can't believe Peyton said that to me. That was so embarrassing.
    I replayed the conversation over and over in my mind. I wouldn't mind just sleeping with Peyton but I would have to get Madison and anyone else out of the way so that could be possible. After all Madison did steal Peyton away from me.
    I started thinking about Peyton again. He was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The way you could see his expressions in his eyes is like looking inside him to see how he's feeling. He's an open book. Always has been since I've known him.
    Of course Peyton did have his run of bad luck with the law. He and Logan had gotten got defacing school property, breaking and entering, defacing public property, rolling yards, breaking into a car, hot-wiring a car, and a whole bunch of other stuff.
    I never understood why he would ever want to hang out with Logan but they had been friends for a while but now since they aren't it'll be good for him to rebuild his reputation back up after having Logan burn it down.

    Tomorrow I will make my move with Peyton but I'm going to have to make sure Madison is no where around.
     
  9. Lol yes I was first and second!
     
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