Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. I missed you too Holly!
     
  2. Sorry if the story seems kinda slow right Now.
     
  3. Haha it's great! AS ALWAYS GIRLIE! Haha:)
     
  4. Thanks Taylor:) btw you need to update again lol
     
  5. I got bored so I have an update but it's short.




    Zack's point of view:

    I was in the living room with Holly and she was asleep on my arm. Peyton was out saying goodbye to Kate, and Garrett and Brianna were in their rooms. I enjoy being with my family more than anything.
    I reached over carefully and grabbed the remote and started flipping through the channels. As usual there was nothing on so I just turned it off. I looked down at my wife of seventeen years and smiled. She is absolutely gorgeous. God I'm glad that she said yes to me.
    I put my head against hers and closed my eyes. When I was almost asleep the phone rang and I mumbled,"Better not be Peyton."
    I looked at the caller ID and I felt my stomach drop. The caller ID said: US ARMY.
    I answered the phone and stayed on for probably less than ten minutes.

    It was quite simple.

    I would be deployed again in a month.
     
  6. OooooooOooooooOoooooo i wonder wat peyt will do great couple of updates your story is awesome dont stop writing
     
  7.  no! Don't go!
    Oh and I updated, Holly 
     
  8. bump!!!! 



     
  9. Bump!!! AND NOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT TEH DEPLOY!!
     
  10. Lol idk if I'll be able to update today but I'll try
     
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