Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. I like that they get dramatic. It makes me feel good about where the story is going.
     
  2. Won't update tonight because I'm tired but I will have one tomorrow
     
  3. Thanks for the cupcake holly!!
     
  4. Texas lol bump
     
  5. So my phone charger is like broken but I kinda got it to where it would work
     
  6. Zack's point of view:

    I didn't want to have to send my son to his uncle's place in Texas but he gave me no choice.
    I'm gonna give him one more chance but if he doesn't straighten up his behavior and get back to music he's going to have to go.
    Peyton just stared at me and finally said,"Dad you can't send me to Texas!"
    I shook my head. I was a little aggravated with him and he was my own son. I looked at him and said,"You get back to your music and I'll see if you need to go or not. And if you do have to go it's either Texas or Pennsylvania. I don't want to have to send you away just so you can get your music back on track but I will if I have to."
    Peyton nodded his head and mumbled,"Sorry dad."
    I sighed. This kid of mine is way too much like me. Now I know why my mom always told me that if I have kids then she hopes at least one of them acts just like me.
    Peyton got up and walked to the door and then turned back around to face me. He looked so much like his mom. Especially when he regretted something. Peyton spoke up and said,"I really am sorry dad."
    I nodded. I could never be really and truly mad at him. He was my son. He was a teenager. He is going to make mistakes regardless. I finally said,"It's ok son. Try to get back to your music though."
     
  7. I. Love. It!
    BUMMPP!
     
  8. My dad would have screamed at me and signed me up for military academy
     
  9. Bump! This is wonderful!
     
  10. Wow strange twists
     
  11. How so? Lol
     
  12. Peyton's point of view:

    Holy sh*t! My dad was giving me another chance and all I had to do was....play my music again.
    Sh*t.
    I walked out of the hospital and got back in my car. I had to call somebody. I needed somebody that would help me get back to my music and get me passionate about it again.
    I went through the list of names. Logan? H*ll no. He was my friend and all but he was shallower than a da*n puddle. Garrett? Maybe. He was my brother and he called me out on stupid sh*t. Keeley? Well I still haven't talked to her since I got back..
    Then there was Kate. I always played better with her around but we haven't talked since the breakup. Da*n this was gonna be hard.
    I pulled out of the parking lot of the hospital and started driving. I had no idea where I was driving to but I just needed to drive.
    I wound up driving to Keeley's house. I needed to talk to her anyway.
     
  13. YAY!!!
    I love it!!!!
    GREAT JOB HOLLY!
     
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