Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. I knows angel but its for the best
     
  2. HOW WHAT WHEN WHYYYYY!!!!!!
    WAIT HE LOVES HIS FRIEND I FORGOT HER NAME KEELY?
     
  3. Lol and Keeley is with Peyton's best friend Logan lol but I don't think it'll be her but I'm not sure
     
  4. Eh go get her kid don't be fallin in love as she's walkin away
     
  5. Lol the tables have turned. Lol he's prob thinking do you like oranges? Well how about dem apples!!! Lol cuz it's like they switched roles
     
  6. Peyton's point of view:

    ".....if we just.....stayed friends."

    I looked down at Kate after I had said those words and she was in tears,"Why Peyton?"
    I sighed and held her,"Because there's no way we can work out a long distance relationship."
    She buried her head in my chest and cried. I hated seeing girls cry. It gave me the worst feeling in the world.....well second worst feeling.

    There was no way I could tell Kate the truth.
    Or Logan.

    I kissed the top of Kate's head and she backed away from me and whispered,"I love you Peyton."
    I smiled faintly,"I love you too Kate."

    She gave me a small smile and went back inside. I sighed and got in my car and drove home.
    When I got home I walked upstairs and changed and went to bed.


    ~*~*~*7hours later~*~*~*

    I woke up to someone pounding on my door. I sighed and said,"Go away!"
    I rolled back over to go back to sleep when something hit my back.
    I turned over and saw my brother and the soccer ball he had thrown at me. I grabbed the soccer ball and threw back at him,"Fu*king bas*ard."
    He laughed and dodged my throw,"Mom and dad said it's time to leave. Mom packed up your stuff last night while you were out. How'd it go with Kate?"
    I sighed and said,"What does it matter how it went."
    I opened my suitcase and grabbed a shirt and put it on. Garrett sighed,"Dude come on. Something happened. Either you two broke up again or fu*ked now which is it."
    I zipped my suitcase back up and grabbed it and started walking downstairs,"We broke up Garrett."
    He mumbled,"You as*hole."

    I sighed and just kept walking. We got outside and started putting the suitcases back in the vehicle and Garrett said,"Hey do you know why Keeley and Logan broke up?"
    I looked at him a little confused and Garrett sighed and said,"Logan text me and said he and Keeley broke up because he found out that she cheated on him before we left."
    I could feel my heart trying to beat out of my chest and the only thing I could think of was: oh da*n. I finally said,"Da*n poor Logan."
    Garrett nodded and said,"Yeah but if you ask me he deserved it since he's always cheating on her."

    I just nodded trying to hide my worried expression.
     
  7. Peyton's point of view:

    We pulled out of the driveway of our old house in our old neighborhood in our old town in our old state. I didn't have anyone to try to win back to me anymore and it felt......good. I loved Kate but it just wasn't right anymore.

    I stayed awake for 4 hours of the ride back to Georgia but I finally gave up and went to sleep....

    *~*~*~*Dream*~*~*~*

    I was in the batting cages in Georgia when Logan came up to me. I turned and said,"Hey man I'm back."
    Logan just stared at me with hatred in his eyes,"It was you wasn't it."
    I look at him confused,"Dude what are you talking about?"
    He shook his head,"You were supposed to be my best friend."
    I put the bat down and walked to him,"Logan what are you talking about?!"
    He pulled out a knife and stabbed me in the stomach,"You fu*ked with my girl you bas*ard."

    *~*~*~*Reality*~*~*~*

    When I woke up I almost fu*king jumped out of my seat. Garrett looked at me,"Dude are you ok?"
    I nod,"Yeah. Never better."
    He rolled his eyes,"Whatever man. Anyway we're almost to the house."

    I looked out the window and saw we were back in Georgia. Sh*t.
     
  8. Bump bumpity moarr 
     
  9. Gonna try for one more update tonight
     
  10. Plz one more
     
  11. Peyton's point of view:

    My dad had to head back to the base tonight so they could deploy him tomorrow. I hated it.
    I stood in the doorway and my dad turned to me,"Peyt I know you hate seeing me go all the time but I got to son."
    I nodded,"I know dad. It's just hard. I mean we never know if you're coming back alive or not and it sucks."
    My dad turned to me,"I promise you I will come back alive son."
    I shook my head,"You can't make that promise if you don't know if you can keep it dad."
    He sighed and put one hand on my shoulder,"You're right son. But I do know that I love your mother and I love you and your brother and sister and I will try my da*n hardest to come back to y'all."
    I nodded,"I know dad it's just...I hate it. I hate how they always have to ruin things. You won't get to see me play this year. H*ll you've never seen me play any of the sports I play! You swore to me last year that you would try to come to a few games this year! You missed soccer and track and now all thats left is baseball and now you're gonna miss those fu*king games as well!!"
    My dad looked at me and calmly said,"Son I know you're upset and I know I've said that I'll come to games but son I promise you I will one day."
    I stayed quiet and dad finished up packing and I followed him downstairs to where mom, Brianna, and Garrett were waiting for him.
    Brianna, Garrett, and I hugged our dad goodbye and mom drove him up to the base. I grabbed my keys and turned to Garrett,"I'm gonna go see Logan. I gotta tell him something."
    Garrett nodded and waved me off and I headed over. I finally got there and knocked on his door. He came to the door and said,"Dude what's up twitch? You just get back home?"
    I nod,"Yeah man I actually have to tell you something."
    He nods and comes outside and says,"Alright what's up?"
    I take a deep breath,"I know who fu*ked with Keeley before I left."
    He tensed up and through gritted teeth he says,"Who?! I'll kill that mother fu*king bas*ard."

    I took a deep breath,

























    "Me."
     
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