Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. Ooooooo peyton is gonna cut himself some moe
     
  2. Nice update i wonder wat hell do
     
  3. bump! I hope he cuts hunter instead of himself
     
  4. I have a long update



    Peyton's point of view:

    I drove home completely numbed to everything. She was on a date with some guy. How the h*ll did this happen?!?!
    I wasn't gonna lose her so easily this time. I noticed earlier that she still wore the locket I gave her and I bet she's never opened it.
    I grabbed my phone and called Garrett.

    RINGRING
    I heard the click and then Garrett's annoyed voice,"What do you want?"
    I pretend like that hurt and say,"Well then. I was just gonna ask you if you still played your bass or not."
    He sighed,"Yeah every now and then. Why?"
    I click my tongue and say,"You're gonna meet me at Old Mexico so I can sing to Kate."
    He waited a minute and said,"Ok. Just don't do anything stupid like an illegal u-turn."
    I click my tongue again and say,"Ya know it hurts knowing that you don't trust me to not do an illegal u-turn."
    He sighed,"No. I just know you."
    I roll my eyes and sigh,"Ok fine just meet me at Old Mexico."


    I hung up the phone and sped up a little bit and waited until there weren't any cars coming in the other lane and that the cars behind me were far behind me and I then slammed on the brakes and cut my wheels hard making my car spin into the other lane and start heading back to town.
    As soon as I got going again to town I yelled,"Fu*k yeah! Better than the da*n movies!"

    I got to Old Mexico and I waited for my brother for what seemed like forever. He finally pulled up and got out with his bass in hand and locked the door and said,"Why the fu*k did I need to bring my bass if you're singing to Kate?"
    I sigh and pick up my guitar and start walking and say,"Because I'm gonna need the bass for what I'm gonna sing to her."
    He was silent for a minute and said,"Alright. Fine. Just don't screw this up."
    I look back at him and say,"Ye of little faith. I got my swagg on an all time high."
    He rolled his eyes and pushed me towards the door,"Just go inside and stop acting like a do*chebag."

    We walk in and I see Kate with what's-his-face. Frankly I could care less about his name all I knew is that he was with my girl.
    I walk up and clear my throat and Kate looks at me completely shocked. I smile and wink at her,"Kate I want to sing you a song."

    What's-his-face stood up and said,"I don't think so bas*ard. Kate and I are on a date so back the fu*king h*ll off."
    Garrett got in between us and grabbed his bass from the neck and lifted it up like a baseball bat and said,"Listen here bas ard. If you don't sit your a*s down I'm gonna introduce my bass to your face."
    I starred my brother like WTF but to my surprise the do*chebag sat down.
    Kate looked at me and said,"You haven't sang to me in a long time."
    I look at her and look down at my guitar and look at her again and say,"I know and I want to change that."
    She smiled and said,"Ok then sing."

    I smile back at her and start playing my guitar and then start singing:
    I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
    Watch you smile while you are sleeping
    While you're far away and dreaming
    I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
    I could stay lost in this moment forever
    Well, every moment spent with you
    Is a moment I treasure
    I don't wanna close my eyes
    I don't wanna fall asleep
    'Cause I'd miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    'Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream would never do
    I'd still miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    Lying close to you
    Feeling your heart beating
    And I'm wondering what you're dreaming
    Wondering if it's me you're seeing
    Then I kiss your eyes and thank God we're together
    And I just wanna stay with you
    In this moment forever, forever and ever
    I don't wanna close my eyes
    I don't wanna fall asleep
    'Cause I'd miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    'Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream would never do
    I'd still miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    I don't wanna miss one smile
    I don't wanna miss one kiss
    Well, I just wanna be with you
    Right here with you, just like this
    I just wanna hold you close
    Feel your heart so close to mine
    And just stay here in this moment
    For all the rest of time
    Don't wanna close my eyes
    Don't wanna fall asleep
    'Cause I'd miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    'Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream would never do
    'Cause I'd still miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    I don't wanna close my eyes
    I don't wanna fall asleep
    'Cause I'd miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    'Cause even when I dream of you
    The sweetest dream would never do
    I'd still miss you, baby
    And I don't wanna miss a thing
    Don't wanna close my eyes
    Don't wanna fall asleep, yeah
    I don't wanna miss a thing
    I don't wanna miss a thing

    I look up at her and see tears in her eyes and say,"I love you Kate. Open the locket I gave you."
    She opened the locket and it read:
    I will love you always. I will love you forever. When I die I will know that I died loving the one girl that I was meant to be with forever.
    -Love Peyton

    She started crying and came over to me and and whispered,"I love you so much Peyton. Please don't leave again."
     
  5. awwwww..... bump!!!!! 





     
  6. Awwwwwhhhh!!!!<3
    Cute :)
     
  7. Bump! I love that song!!!
     
  8. I failed to mention that what the inside of the locket said was part two or Kate's three part gift from Peyton
     
  9. Garrett's point of view:

    Watching Kate and Peyton was.......sweet but more sickening than sweet. I mean yeah it was obvious they loved each other and all that sh*t but they both knew how all this would end. I sit down in one of the booths and start strumming on my bass when the do*chebag stood up.
    I jumped up and said,"Uh you must really want to meet my bass. Now sit your god da*n mother fu*king a*s down your da*n bas*ard."
    He looked at me like he wanted to punch me and held my arms up and said,"Hit me bi*ch. You won't be able to anyway because I know every single person in this room."
    He pushes past me and left the restaurant and I mumbled,"Wuss."
    I turned back to my brother and Kate and said,"How about we go back to the house? I'm sure mom and dad would like to see you back with Kate."




    Peyton's point of view:

    Da*n I had the greatest brother. First he threatened the guy that was trying to steal Kate away from me with his bass and then he cussed the little mother fu*ker out.
    I was holding Kate's hand as we walked back to my car to head to my house and I stopped her and said,"By the way what was written on the inside of your locket was part two or that three part present."
    She smiled her beautiful smile that made me so weak in the knees and got on her tiptoes and kissed me. I wrapped my arms around her and picked her up. I put her back down and pull apart a little and put my forehead against hers,"I love you Kate."
    She looks up at me with her brown eyes and says,"I love you too Peyton. Please don't leave again."
    I sigh and take her hand and open the car door and help her in and shut her door. I go over to my side and crank the car and say,"You know I have to leave Saturday. Let's just make every minute count."
     
  10. Bump 

    I don't wanna miss a thing - aero smith  amazing
     
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