Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. Writers block. Stop for maybe a day then see if u can think of something
     
  2. My writers block is gone!!! I'm in the middle of writing now:D
     
  3. I have an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




    Brianna's point of view:

    I heard the front door slam and I knew it was Peyton. He had been slamming doors a lot lately but this was a little too much. I walked to my door as soon as he slammed his.
    Great someone is in a pissy mood.
    I walk downstairs and see Garrett,"Hey whats wrong with Peyt?"
    Garrett looked at me and said,"He saw Kate today."
    I gasped and said,"Thats great!!!! How did it go?!?!?!"
    Garrett looked at me,"He cussed her out. I'm surprised he didn't call her a bi*ch."
    I look at him completely shocked,"Oh. I'm gonna go talk to him."
    Garrett rolled his eyes,"Good luck."

    I go upstairs and when I get to Peyton's door I stop. He was playing his guitar and singing. I've always loved listening to him play and sing. His voice sounded like Chris Daughtry and David Cook combined. It was awesome.
    He would always sing to me when I couldn't sleep or when I had a bad day. He was the best big brother in the world.





    Peyton's point of view:

    After hanging up with Keeley I picked up my guitar and started singing Chris Daughtry's song Life After You:
    You and I, right or wrong, there's no other one
    After this time I spent alone
    It's hard to believe that a man with sight could be so blind
    Thinkin' 'bout the better times, must've been outta my mind
    So I'm runnin' back to tell you
    All that I'm after is a life full of laughter
    Without you God knows what I'd do
    All that I'm after is a life full of laughter
    As long as I'm laughing with you
    I'm thinkin' that all that still matters is love ever after
    After the life we've been through
    'Cause I know there's no life after you

    I looked up and saw Brianna,"Da*n Bri. You Fu*king scared me. What do you want?"
    She looked at me and said,"Just wanted to see how my big brother was doing. I heard you saw Kate. How did it go?"
    I looked at her and said,"I cussed her out how do you think it went?"
    She sighed,"Peyton you know you love Kate. Why did you cuss her out?"
    I get up and put my guitar back,"I don't know I guess I was just pissed off. I do love Kate. More than anything."
    Brianna looked at me and said,"Then go find her and apologize."
    I nodded and grabbed my jacket and guitar,"I'll do better than that. I'll sing to her."
     
  4. Bump 
     
  5. HEH COOOL PEYT GO SING TO HER SHELL LIKE IT
    GREAT UPDATE!!!!
     
  6. I'll update tomorrow. Listening to music cures writers block lolXD
     
  7. bump!!!!! 




     
  8. Bump please or I will cry!jkjk
     
  9. Awwee bumpp!!
     
  10. Kate's point of view:

    I was about to walk out of my house to go see Peyton when someone grabbed my hand.
    I turned around and saw Hunter,"What are you doing?!?!"
    Hunter got closer to me and put his head against mine and said,"We have our date tonight remember."
    I look at him and say,"I'm so sorry I forgot all about it."
    He sighs and says,"It's ok let's just go. Your mom knows where we are going so let's just go."




    Peyton's point of view:

    I drove to Kate's house but it seemed like it took forever. When I finally got there I grabbed my guitar and ran to her door and knocked.
    Her mom came to the door and said,"Oh Peyton I didn't expect to see you here."
    I faintly smile and say,"Uh yeah I was just looking for Kate."
    Kate's mom stared at me shocked and said,"She's at Old Mexico on a date."
     
  11. bump!!!!! 




     
  12. Hope to have more updates tomorrow
     
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