Start of Something Good

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Jan 25, 2012.

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  1. Whoa.... Bump!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Bumbumbummmmm. Poor Peyton.
     
  3. Garrett's point of view:

    I couldn't believe it. My brother was fu*king cutting himself along with drinking and smoking.
    I walked upstairs and knocked on his door,"Peyt man open up."
    Peyton's hoarse voice came through,"Go the fu*king h*ll away."
    I sighed and went to my room and found a paperclip. I went back to his door and picked his lock. You learn a lot just by watching tv. I opened the door and walked in and shut the door and saw blood.
    I went to Peyton,"Dude what the fu*king h*ll!!?!?!"
    Peyton grimaced and whispered,"I had to. It hurts so bad being without Kate. This is the only thing that makes me feel better."
    I walked out of his room and got a rag and put warm to almost hot water on it and came back,"Here. Put this on those cuts and hold it and don't fu*king whine."
    He took it and winced when it touched the cuts,"Why are you doing this Garrett."
    I looked at him,"Because. You're my brother. You've protected me all my life and now it's my turn to protect you."
     
  4. Bump bump bump bump!!!
     
  5. Wooooooaaaaaaa
    Peyt. Flipped his sh.t at his parents
    Thts a cool bro though
    rhymed so cool lol
     
  6. What did y'all think of Peyton's little outburst
     
  7. Gonna try to update today
     
  8. Peyton's point of view:

    Garrett stayed with me until the bleeding stopped and I doctored my wounds up and put on a different shirt. It doesn't matter if I wore longsleeve now since my family saw the cuts.

    I finished packing up my things and walked down stairs. God I was in so much pain.
    I walked outside to the vehicle and started loading up everything. After I loaded up the last thing I reached up under my shirt and wiped the cuts and drew my hand back and saw more blood. Fu*king great.
    I went back inside and cleaned off my cuts and put two of those huge ace bandages on it. I went back to my room and changed shirts and went back outside and got in the vehicle since the rest of my family was waiting for me.

    *~*~*~*10 hours later*~*~*~*

    I don't know if I had fallen asleep but when I woke up all I saw was a huge sign:
    WELCOME TO PHILADELPHIA, MISSISSIPPI

    I sighed. Hopefully this week wouldn't be so bad. Right?
     
  9. bump!!!!!!! 




     
  10. wooops!!!!




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  11. Awww poor peyton BUMP 
     
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