Start of Something Good (Redone)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, May 29, 2012.

  1. update!!! 













     
  2. I will update soon but I'm not going to go into all the details of what they do haha
     
  3. Peyton's point of view:

    I couldn't believe what was happening. I was actually going to do it with the girl I love without anyone getting in the way of us being together or being happy.
    I pulled away and even though my shirt was off, I asked Kate,"Are you sure you want to do this because I can stop if you aren't ready."
    She smiled and shook her head,"No Peyton I'm pretty sure that I'm ready. I want this just like you do."
    I smiled at her and kissed her lips softly but passionately and slowly slide my hands under her shirt and take her shirt off slowly.

    I know you're wondering what the hell Peyton why are you going so ****ing slow? Well it's simple. I love her and I don't want to rush into this. I want to take my time and go slow since I know she has never done it before and I want this to be a good first time for her.

    I finally got Kate's shirt off and I just looked at her smiling. She was just so breathtakingly beautiful that I had to stop and just stare at her. She was mine, all mine and I was not going to mess this up again and lose her again.
    I kissed her forehead softly and I felt her hands go down my chest and abs and stop at my belt and I smiled while kissing her forehead and I could feel her undoing my belt, so I decided to help out and I got up and undid my belt and shorts and let them fall on the floor then got back on the bed with her and started kissing down from her forehead to her nose, her lips, her chin, her neck, her chest, her stomach. I stopped at her jeans and looked up at her to see if I still had the go-ahead and she smiled and nodded and I slowly and gently undid her jeans and slid them off and I continued kissing her, but instead of going straight down I moved to her thighs.

    Now I'm not gonna go into all the details of what happened that night, but I can say it was the best night of my life, and hopefully hers. We didn't do it just once, or twice, or even three times. We did it five times, and at 4 am, I decided it was time for us to get some sleep.
    I held Kate in my arms while we slept and it was the greatest feeling in the world holding the girl of my dreams in my arms.
     
  4. Hey y'all can yall please try to get more readers pretty please:) I will love y'all for like ever:)
     
  5. update! 














     
  6. Peyton's point of view:

    It was about noon when I woke up and I looked down at Kate and saw that she was still asleep. I carefully got up from my spot, trying to move her as little as possible, and put on some shorts and went downstairs so I could fix Kate and I some lunch.
    When I got downstairs I got the spaghetti stuff out and started to cook spaghetti since it was easy and I didn't feel like doing anything that would take a long time. As I was cooking, I heard Kate coming downstairs and I smiled and waited until she came into the kitchen and I looked up when I saw a flicker of movement and saw that it was Kate and she was wearing one of my tshirts. I smiled and said,"Goodmorning my incredibly beautiful girlfriend."
    She smiled and I could see her cheeks getting a little red and she said,"Goodmorning my amazing boyfriend."
    I smiled and said,"Is spaghetti fine with you?"
    She nodded and said,"Yeah. Do you need any help?"
    I shook my head,"No baby I don't, but thank you for offering to help. I'm almost done."
    She smiled and sat back and waited patiently and when I finished I fixed her plate for her and a drink for her and took them to the table where she was sitting at and put them down on the table she was sitting at and I kissed her on top of her head and said,"Here you go baby."
    She smiled and said,"Thank you sweetie."
    I smiled and went back and fixed my plate and a drink and came back to the table and sat down beside her. We talked the whole time we were eating about what's been going on in our lives. She told me everything that has happened with her, and I told her everything that has happened with me, well almost everything.
    I didn't tell her about what my ex best friend did because I didn't want her to be worried about me. She told me about her plans of going to East Mississippi Community College and cheering and then going to a 4-year university for nursing. I smiled and said,"Well if anyone can do it I know you can baby."
    She blushed and said,"Well what about you? What are you gonna do?"
    I thought a minute and said,"I'm gonna try to come back to Mississippi and go to a community college and then to University of Mississippi Medical Center and study in occupational therapy, or I might do pre-law. I haven't really decided yet."
    She smiled and said,"Those are both good things to go into. I'm sure you'll do great with whatever you decide to do."
    I smiled at her and kissed her softly and said,"I gotta take you back to the fairgrounds soon, and I really don't want to do that."
    She smiled and said,"And why not?"
    I closed my eyes and smiled and then opened my eyes again and looked into Kate's eyes and said,"Well its quite simple actually. This moment right here, right now is one of best things that has ever happened. In not even 24 hours, the girl that I love so much, more than all my guitars, took me back when I was a complete bastard to her the last time we spoke and I was able to show her exactly how much I loved her and cared for her last night."
    She smiled and started to blush and said,"Well do I know this girl?"
    I smiled and said,"Quite well actually. She has your eyes, your hair, your smile, your laugh, your personality, your thoughtfulness. She is just like you in every possible, and I believe with all my heart that she is the most breathtakingly beautiful girl and the entire world and I'm looking at her right now wondering why in world would someone so amazing take me back?"
     
  7. how cute! update! 
















     
  8. AWW IT'S AMAZING! BUMP!
     
  9. Kate's point of view:

    All I could do was smile at him. I couldn't speak because I knew that if I did, I would more than likely start crying and I didn't want to cry in front of him.
    Peyton looked at me with his gorgeous blue eyes, and they seemed as if they were searching my eyes for the answer to his question.
    I took a deep breath and said,"I took you back because I know we are meant for each other and we would do anything to make the other happy," I could feel tears starting to well up in my eyes and I still continued,"I took you back because I love you no matter what hell you put me through and no matter how far away we are from each other," my tears were now coming out of my eyes and streaming down my cheeks, but I still continued,"I took you back because I know that no matter how much of an ass you act like, you're still the same Peyton who has meant and still does mean the world to me and I know you've just been around the wrong people and I know that this isn't who you really are because the real Peyton is who I love with all my heart and the real Peyton is sitting in front of me."

    When I finished, I was still crying, and after a few seconds Peyton wrapped his arms around me and pulled me onto his lap and I put my head on his shoulder and kept crying and he just held me and rocked me a little bit and in a whisper he said,"Baby, the real Peyton died when we broke up after I moved to Georgia. I was a mess without you and I didn't know how to cope with losing the love of my life. After we got back together again, I started to become my old self again, but I wanted you to be happy without me so I ended things with us and I realize now that that was a huge mistake on my part, and now that we are together again, I promise you I will never make the mistake of letting you go again baby I love you way too much to ever be that stupid again."
    I felt him kiss the top of my head and I smiled and sniffed a bit and say,"I hope you don't because I won't know what to think if it happens again."
    He smiled and said,"I promise you I won't."
    I smiled and said,"I'm gonna go upstairs and take a shower. Can you take me to my house after so I can change into some other clothes?"
    He smiled and said,"Of course I will."
     
  10. Hope y'all like it
     
  11. OMG amazing as usual. BUMP! 
     
  12. So sorry I haven't updated. Been so busy with school and tests. Have final exams in two weeks but I will try to update this week and/or next week.
     
  13. Gah I've been so busy I've neglected the story I will update this week
     
  14. Ok so I got a new phone and I had to make a different account haha but I will continue haha
     
  15. Don't know if I'll continue or not..