Start of Something Good (Redone)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, May 29, 2012.

  1. BUMP!! Go Peyton!
     
  2. PEEYYYTTTOOONNN!!!!! GO PEYTON!!
     
  3. update!  that was too short! 













     
  4. I know it was short Mia lol I had to put something lol but I'm gonna do Peyton's view soon
     
  5. Sorry I haven't been on!! College is brutal
     
  6. Peyton's point of view:

    You know that feeling you get when you're waiting for an answer from someone?
    Well that's how I was feeling now.
    My heart was racing and all I could hear was this little voice saying shes never gonna take you back.
    I kept looking at Kate expectantly but she never said anything. I was about to say something when Garrett came up behind me and said,"Peyton come on we got more to sing."
    I looked at Kate and she nodded to me and said,"I'll wait until you're finished."
    I nodded and went back on the stage and said,"Sorry for walking off the stage like that. I'll make sure it wont happen again."
    I looked at Garrett and he got to his mic and said,"Now we're gonna play a Luke Bryan song. Here's me and my brother with Drunk on You by Luke Bryan."
    Garrett looks at me and nods and I start to play a bit and then I start to sing:
    Cottonwood fallin' like snow in July
    Sunset, riverside, 4 wheel drives
    In a tail light circle Roll down the windows, turn it on up Pour a little crown in a dixie cup Get the party started
    [Chorus:]
    Girl, you make my speakers go boom boom Dancin' on the tailgate in a full moon That kinda thing makes a man go mmm hmmm You're lookin' so good in what's left of those blue jeans Drip of honey on the money make her gotta be The best buzz I'm ever gonna find Hey, I'm a little drunk on you And high on summertime
    If you ain't a 10 you're a 9.9 Tippin' n' spillin' that home-made wine On your tied up T-shirt Every little kiss is drivin' me wild throwin' little cherry bombs into my fire Good god almighty
    [Chorus:]
    Girl, you make my speakers go boom boom dancin' on the tailgate in a full moon
    That kinda thing makes a man go mmm hmmm You're lookin' so good in what's left of those blue jeans Drip of honey on the money make her gotta be the best buzz I'm ever gonna find hey, I'm a little drunk on you
    And high on summertime Let's slip on out where it's a little bit darker
    And when it gets a little bit hotter
    We'll take it off on out in the water
    [Chorus:]
    Girl, you make my speakers go boom boom Dancin' on the tailgate in a full moon That kinda thing makes a man go mmm hmmm You're lookin' so good in what's left of those blue jeans
    Drip of honey on the money make her gotta be The best buzz I'm ever gonna find Hey, I'm a little drunk on you
    And high on summertime
    Yeah, I'm a little drunk on you

    We finished and again everyone started clapping and I started searching for Kate.
    I saw her a little ways away talking to the guy she was with, and they both seemed upset.

    Garrett and I sang two more songs before Kate came back over, but the guy she was with didnt come back, instead, he walked towards the midway.
    I looked at Kate questioningly and she just shook her head.
     
  7. Come ooonnnn whats her answer gonna beeee
     
  8. Sorry I haven't updated. I have finals this week
     
  9. update!!!! that was a good update!  NEXT!!! 





    come on holly any day now! 








     
  10. Peyton's point of view:

    Garrett and I played the rest of our set and when we finished I put my guitar up and started making my way towards Kate.
    On my way I got stopped by just about everyone that was there and they kept telling my how great me and my brother sounded and I told them thanks and then started back to going to Kate.
    I finally got to her and she was talking with Julie, with her back turned towards me, and I came up behind her quietly and wrapped my arms around her and put my head on her shoulder and I whispered in her ear,"I've missed you Kate."
    She turned her hear towards me and I could see tears in her eyes, but she was smiling, and then she turned all the way around in my arms and whispered,"I've missed you too Peyton."

    I let out a relieved sigh and put my forehead against hers and whispered,"I really want to kiss you right now."
     
  11. Holly girl get it together  that was the shortest update ever! Next!!!! 







     
  12. I'm trying haha
     
  13. Kate's point of view:

    Did Peyton really say what I think he just said?!
    I couldn't speak. I couldn't think. Peyton just told me he wanted to kiss me and I knew without a doubt that I wanted to kiss him as well. We were soul mates and we loved each other deeply.
    After what seemed like forever, I finally spoke and said,"Then do it."
    The next thing I knew was Peyton gave me a huge smile and wrapped his arms tightly around me and kissed my lips so hard and passionately that it felt like he wanted to fuck me right there.
    His lips were hot and I could feel his tongue running over my lips and it just made me melt. I automatically wrapped my arms around his neck and I felt him bend down a bit and then lift me off the ground. I wrapped my legs around him and he held me tight against his body and when we finally pulled away he smiled at me with that incredibly charming smile and whispered,"Let's go somewhere so we can be alone."
     
  14.  great update holly!!!!!




    CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS 