Start of Something Good (Redone)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, May 29, 2012.

  1. I cant wait for the next update!
     
  2. Yay there's life!!! Lol
     
  3. YOU BET IM GONNA ALWAYS BE HERE
     
  4. BUMPP!!!!!! :) I am glad you got unsilenced, holly!! :)
     
  5. I am too it feels amazing!!
     
  6. Peyton's point of view:

    We were about to start when I saw Kate walk up at the last minute with another guy. At that moment I decided to completely change songs so I went to my brother and said,"You know what man lets change songs. I want to sing a Brantley Gilbert song that Kate always wanted me to sing to her."
    He looked at me and and looked over to where Kate was and said,"Dude she's with someone. Let it go."
    I shook my head and said,"I can't let this go. She's my everything and I want to try to build everything back."
    He took me to the said and said,"Peyt you're my brother and I love you to death but you're acting like a dumb***. You burned that bridge between you and Kate and you think you can rebuild it in a couple hours of singing songs. Let it go. Grow a pair and let it go."
    I look at him completely pissed off and say,"We're singing a Brantley Gilbert song."
    He looked at me and said,"Fine whatever man."

    We walked back up to the stage and I picked up my guitar and hit the top of the microphone to make sure it was on and then I said,"Hey y'all. I don't know if y'all remember me at all but I'm Peyton I went to Neshoba for like 3 years and this is my brother Garrett and we're gonna take up a couple hours of your time and sing some songs but this first song I want to dedicate to someone who's always been there for me but I treated awfully the last time I was here and I just want to say right now baby I'm sorry. I never meant to make you cry. I never meant to hurt you so bad. I just wanted you to forget about me so you could move on with your life but I realized this week that we never should have broken up. I should have spent every waking moment with you loving you and treating you like the princess you are. Katherine Michelle Timmons I'm sorry. I just want you to forgive me for acting like such a bastard Kate. So I'm going to start off by singing Play Me That Song by Brantley Gilbert."

    I looked back at Garrett and nodded my head and we both started playing and then I started to sing:
    She's stopping by real late tonight, just to talk.
    She said I got some things that been weighing on my mind,
    and I know I can come there.
    And we just sit and man we talk a while
    She spills her heart in these arms of mine.
    And then she says.
    Play me that song, play me that song you wrote
    About the girl who might not ever know,
    how much you care, or how much you love her. hmm.
    Play me that song, play me that song again
    boy I like to think there's someone there
    who might love me just like that,
    so play me that song again.
    Wasted time on small town guys, nothing but drama.
    Theres a trail of tears that leads right to her side
    And i know how to hold her.
    She knows i dont give a damn,
    About the rumors spread or whats been said
    I just hold on tight till the time is right.
    Play me that song, play me that song I wrote
    about the girl who might not ever know,
    how much I care, or how much I love her.
    Play me that song, play me that song again
    cause she like to think there's someone there
    who might love her just like that,
    so play me that song again.
    Oh baby I'll never get tired
    I'll play it all night, I'll sit underneath the sunrise til I'm black and blue.
    You make it easy to do.
    Baby that song, baby that song I wrote
    about the girl who might not ever know, how much I care, or how much I love her.
    Baby that song, I gotta tell you
    the truth I've been hiding this to long
    from you. Cant believe you never knew,
    Its all about you.
     
  7. this story makes me happy
     
  8. Bump! I love this story, holly! You are doing a very good job! :)
     
  9. update! 









     
  10. Mia!!! How great is it that I can speak now!! Lol
     
  11. In the process of writing:)
     
  12. Update it!!! Quick jk take your time
     
  13. What is the name of the song at the end of the latest update ?
     
  14. And who is the artist/band ?
     
  15. So been working on college stuff-.- the name of the song is Play Me That Song and it is by Brantley Gilbert
     
  16. Kate's point of view:

    I couldn't believe it. Peyton was publicly apologizing to me in front of everyone in Neshoba county. It was embarrassing but extremely sweet at the same time.

    I could feel everyone's eyes burning into me as I stared up at the stage at Peyton. I couldn't forgive him for what he did but I wanted to so bad. He was my whole world and it was making it known to everyone that he screwed up. I tore my eyes away from Peyton and glanced at Austin who was extremely pissed off and I knew I had to make a choice.
    After Peyton made his announcement he sang Play Me That Song by Brantley Gilbert and I knew he was really and truly sorry because he would only sing it when he wanted to apologize for something he knew was wrong that he did.
    As he was singing I could feel the tears start to well up in my eyes. I wanted him back so bad but I knew that it would be hard for us to rebuild everything that he had destroyed.
     
  17. Forgive him Kate pleeaassseeee