Splintered Arrows

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Wife, Dec 13, 2011.

  1. The old door swung upon, and just as she stepped out, she was shoved to the floor. Crying out, she stared at the figure above her. It was Dell, one of the strangers who had been smirking when she made a fool of herself earlier. "What'dyou think your doing?" He barked, and yanked her to her feet, gripping her arm until she thought her bone would snap. "Don't you know-"
    He was interrupted as a figure stepped in between them, shoving Dell back a few steps. "Dell" He glared. "Back off"
    Dell stepped toward, fury alight in his dark, pitless eyes. "Who do you think you are, Renn?" Dell's dark brown hair fell into his eyes, making him seem even more murderous.
    Renn and Dell glared at eachother, and
    Riddle thought she could feel the dark electricity in between them. She had a feeling this wasn't the first time they had clashed.
    "Boys, boys. Fighting over the new girl, already?"
    Riddle turned to the doorway to see a striking girl, with dark red hair and emerald eyes. Lee. Riddle could see Dell's jaws tighten at the sight of her. Lee wore a smirk, and she strolled over to Riddle. "Trying to escape already? Good luck with that."
     
  2. Should I continue?

    Only two people are reading? .__.
     
  3. Make that three. Awesome story. BUMP!! 
     
  4. Make that four. Bump!! 
     
  5. Riddle was still being held hostage by the group. She had gained a little bit of their trust, though, and now they let her outside as long as someone went with her.
    She opened the front door and stepped out. Renn jumped in front of her. "And where are you going?" He said
    "I thought you guys were allowing me some fresh air." She grumbled, rolling her eyes.
    "You have to have supervision" He told her. "They think you'll run away"
    "Well, are you coming, then?" She asked, impatiently, and started walking away from the hotel.
    Renn caught her arm, turning her back. "What makes you think I want to go? Maybe I won't let you."
    She glared. "I can very well just leave, jackass."
    He smirked. "Then why haven't you?"
    "I...I don't want to." She lied. She didn't want to seem weak.
    "What?" He asked, surprised, "Why would you want to stay?"
    Riddle coughed, and stalled by turning and walking away. "I'll go by myself if you don't come."
    He caught up with her easily, walking beside her. "Where could you possibly want to go, that's better then the hotel?" He teased.
    "I need to go home. To get my things." She said simply.
    He eyes were curious, by he didn't question her. "I didn't think of that"
    She didn't respond, but instead kept walking in silence. Her parents were both at work, so she would just sneak in and back out.
    She knew no one had noticed the death of her siblings, or her disappearance. He parents had kept them isolated, rarely letting them out and homeschooling them.
    Riddle snuck in through the back, and headed up to her room. Renn followed
     
  6. I'm so dumb. Every time I read a story,I always forget to bump. 
     
  7. Bump

    I'll update eventually
     
  8. Eventually?!? No!!!!! Eventually could be a minute or a week!! 
     
  9. Eventually ....
     
  10. DERP. I finally updated.
    It's a sucky update though 

    Riddle sighed, this dreaded house only brought back memories of the recent days before.
    She quickly gathered her clothes and a few books, stuffed them in a bag, and rushed back downstairs.
    Renn looked at the bundle in her hands. "That's all you're getting?"
    She nodded.
    "It's all I need" She said, walking back out the front door. Renn ran a hand through his hair. "Well, okay" he muttered, closing the door behind him, as he followed. Riddle was approaching the abandoned building, her new home/prison, when Renn spoke again. "You'd like it here if you tried." He told her, looking up at the building. He apparently didn't see what she saw. She turned a glare on him. "I'm being kept hostage in a run down, empty hotel by insane teenagers who think I'm a SPY." She hissed at him.
    Renn looked offended. "We do our best to keep it livable." He argued. "And we already confirmed that you're Not a spy..." smirking slightly...
    Riddle huffed and stormed into the "hotel."
     
  11. Bump!!!! 