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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Syoka, Dec 1, 2012.
Renna: *shuts up when she hears Max, makes realistic bird chirp sounds*
I don't know anymore... I honestly don't know...
Max:I don't think birds can hum whoever show yourself-stares at the tree intently-
*whoever you are
Renna: *swears and jumps down out of the trees*
Max:-sees her jump down and jumps down after her- Hello
-Shuffles a rock around-
Renna: Why hello, I am master blacksmith, swordswoman, and chef. Who may you be?
Max:Just a warrior pretty simple huh?
I better get going...
Renna: Nice to meet you, I'm Renna Mireon, you can call me Ren
(On ur application, it says that ur a blacksmith)
-Walks home via the forest-
Max:Ok well I'm Max nice to meet you-reaches out hand for a handshake-
(I know it does)
Ren: *takes hand and is about to shake it, when she falls into him*
Max:-catches her- Woah, you ok?
Ren: *eyes are closed, not waking up*
Max:-becomes worried-Hello?
Renna: *suddenly wakes up and tries to sit up, banging her head against his*