Sophia - True Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Beth0411, May 13, 2012.

  1. Preeeteeey preeeteeey pleeeassseee uuppdaaateee
     
  2. Bump! But me has a question.
    WHY DID YOU STOP UPDATING "WHY NOT?"!!!!!!!!!!!
    It was goodand you left us all hanging with the soon to be death of Daivd. Please update this story AND "Why not?" both are really good!
     
  3. HEY!!! i'm sooo sorry! I have just moved house so have no intenet but at my dad's now!! And do you mean my story 'The One?' cause I'm so sorry!! I can't find it!:( hahaha love you guys! update soon!
     
  4. That date was officially over. Although I felt some sort of feelings towards Luke I couldn't decide if they were positive, or negative.

    I was kind of hoping it was negative I mean he was my best friend's boyfriend...but I couldn't help but think how romantic and tense I felt when our lips almost touched....

    "LUCCYY?!?! earth to air head!" sophia's voice rang in my ears at the exact moment she interuppte me Luke last time...

    "huh?" I said shaking my head, "sorry!" i could feel myself turn a shade of indigo. I was so insecure.

    "so??" Sophia said in disspair.."what did you think?" almost shouting now.

    I creased y forehead, "what are you talking about?" I replied also really frustrated.

    "LUKE!!!" she screamed.

    "ahhh Luke" I said dreamily, not knowing I said it aloud.

    "what did you just say?!" shr folded her arms.

    "I meant....ergh Luke. Haaha, haha, ha ha...ha...." I laughed uneasily.

    "what's so 'ergh'?!" she was in such a bad mood.

    "oh! Nothing! Haha, I errr...I'm not with it today...I just..I..I give up." I got up and left.

    Sophia followed me, her perfect tan reflecting off the sun's Midas light.

    "what's up Lucy? You...you haven't been yourself lately." she seemed concerned.

    What should I do? Should I tell her? No that's stupid..i'm probably just overreacting, maybe I imagined the whole thing...maybe I'm just being stupid..I mean come on who would want to kiss me?

    "I guess I did imagine the whole thing..." I said my thoughts aloud, again.

    Dammit! I thought.

    "imagine what?" sophia said, touching my arm with comfort.

    I shook her off and ran away, as I was running I heard her shout after me, "imagine what?!"

    I kept on running until I got outside his classroom...Luke's classroom.
     
  5. amazing story
    what does bump mean??
     
  6. B-ring
    U-p
    M-y
    P-ost
    And I am loving this story! Keep up the amazing work!
     
  7. I am sooo sorry I haven't updated! Had no Internet connection fo ages!!! I shall update later on tonight!!
     
  8. HI NEW READER AND THIS STORY IS AMAZING LOVE IT BUMP PLEASE
     
  9. I FUCK ING LOVE THIS!
     
  10. Awww thankyouuu!!! Here's a short update...


    There he was. Sitting there, slouching in his chair and drawing something instead of listening to the lesson.

    I couldn't quite make out what he was drawing, but it looked like a girl..

    I stood there for ages trying to figure out what he was drawing, I didn't realise his teacher wasshoiting through the door at me, "Lucy Bedworth?! What are you doing?!" she bellowed.

    I jumped in shock horror, clutching my heart and took one moreglance at Luke.

    Wow! I know this is cheesy but I swear to you I could feel electricty. Our glance intensified as he stood up and walked outside: ignoring thr bellows from his teacher.

    He closed the door behind him and walked towards me..."hey, what are you doi-"

    "what's this?" Sophia said.

    CRAP!!! we sprung apart, I ddnt notice how close we were.

    Luke scratched his head thinking of an answer, he though of one last time.

    I gave him the 'i'll take it from here' look.

    "nothing....you can't know" I said playfully, that sounded better in y head.

    She raised a perfect eyebrow at me.

    "birthday presents." I whispered.

    Her concerned frown lifted into a smile. "oh okay! It looked a bit like you guys were going behind my back to kiss...or something stupid like that." she laughed..."as if! I need to stop worrying."

    Me and Luke quickly glanced at eachother, "ha...ha yeh you...you ermm need to stop....worrying......when's lunch?" I said scratching my head uncomfortably and looking at my watch.

    "now." Luke said as the ell rang.

    "come on guys, there's sushi today" Sophia wandered off.

    Me and Luke, still holding our breaths, let out gasps of air.

    "woah that was shit scary!" He giggled.

    His smile was incredible.

    "can we..skype tonight?" he asked, now serious

    "of course! Yeah, sure...let's say 8?"
    I replied, holding my arm.

    "cool. Let's go to lunch." he patted my arm and walked ahead.

    I stared down at my arm...woah...talk about sparks.

    I realised people were looking at me funny cause I was standing there staring at my arm.

    I ran to lunch with my best friend and her boyfriend...who I think I was in love with...
     
  11. Sorry for all the typos!
     
  12. This is really good! Update!!