Sophia - True Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Beth0411, May 13, 2012.

  1. I thought she made it? Update!
     
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  3. I thought Sophia was ok!?!?
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  4. Update please 
     
  5. New update!
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    Mum and Dad looked at eachother, worried.

    "Darling, Sophia isn't dead." My dad said, cocerned for my memory loss.

    "she isn't?!" I cried with joy.

    Oh my god...not everything had been taken away from me.

    Just at that moment, there was a knock on the door.

    "come in!" My parents both eagerly yelled.

    As the door opened, Sophia entered. She was glowing, her face looked beautiful as always, not a scratch in sight.

    But she was in a wheelchair.

    "Sophia!!" I cried.

    I looked down at her absolutely mortified, "what...why?? Oh my god Sophia...what happened??" I cried.

    "it's okay.." she teared up, "let's just focus on you recovering eh?" she chirped, still with a depressed tone in her voice, while she nudged my shoulder.

    "darling, Sophia was badly bruised in her back, by those two vulgar men, almost where it was going to kill her, they had to do some major surgery on her back, but something went wrong..." my Dad trailed off.

    I couldn't stop my tears from flowing.

    "it's okay...at least I've been blessed with more time of my life and you..we can get through this together.." she smiled.

    Even though she smiling, inside she was screaming.

    "but..why would you ever want to see me again?? I stole your boyfriend..I...I was the reason for his death...I...I love him so much...and...now...he's...gone." I cred breaking down in tears.

    I saw Sophia look away from me, this was all too upsetting.

    "it's not your fault." she said encouragingly.

    Although there was a sharp edge to her voice which made me not believe her.

    "Mum, Dad, Sophia..I...I want to be alone." I said.

    They scurried off, Mum kissing my forehead before she left, Sophia waving patronisingly, and Dad giving me the 'Dad' stare.

    I sat up in my bed, my pelvis ached and moaned from where I fractured it.

    I sat and sobbed.

    I wouldn't think there'd be enough tears left for me.

    "Luke...I want you back...Luke if you're looking down on me...I'm sorry, I'm so so sorry. It's all my fault, I can't...I won't live with myself for this...I love you, forever." I sobbed, whispering.

    It might seem stupid, but I needed him to know...even if he was dead.
     
  6. Amazing!!!!!
     
  7.  Amazing as always
     
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  9. Wonderful job. Bump!
     
  10. Bump!! I'm still crying 
     
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  12. Bumpdate-Bumpdate seal of Approval
     
  13. Hey, I have to go out now but when I get back I shall update for you guys:)
    Mwah x