Something Missing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Aug 22, 2011.

  1.      NYANCAT SAYS BUMP!
     
  2. u must bump now because NYAN CAT VISITED IT MUST BE IMPORTANT!!!  I can putt on someone's wall if they like but u mist be awesome 
     
  3. "I love Katherine Revant."

    I looked at Rafe. And he looked at me smiling sweetly and gently. I smiled back and he reached out and took my hand.

    "I love you with all my heart," he said.

    "I love you too..."

    "So... This is my punishment then?" asked Mackenzie. "For letting you go... this is my punishment." Tears rolled down his cheeks and he clenched his fists. "Damn it... You could have been mine..."

    "We would've found out sooner or later," I said.

    "Found out what?" asked Rafe.

    "Rafe... Mackenzie... h-he's my... Mackenzie is my older brother!" I said quickly. "He's my older brother..." I looked away from him.

    "Wh-what? But I thought you and him... loved each other?"

    "We did. But we didn't know that we were related in any way. I still don't want to believe it... I don't can't believe it... otherwise those memories from my childhood will disappear. My feelings for Mackenzie will disappear... I don't want that to happen."

    "Katherine..." Mackenzie whispered.

    "I still love you, and you will always be my first love... but I love Rafe and only Rafe... with everything I have left in me. You died... and that's how it should remain... you should remain dead inside my memories."

    He looked so hurt that I had to quickly grab Rafe's hand and quickly leave.

    "Wait!" he shouted after us.

    I turned around to see him running after us. He caught up and grabbed my hand and pulled me towards him. He leaned over and kissed my lips, his other hand behind my neck.

    "I love you Katherine, and I always will," he said before releasing me and running away.

    "I will love you... for always as well..." I whispered.

    "Of course you are still happy with me, right?" asked Rafe. He smiled jokingly at me.

    "Yes. Of course I'm happy with you!" I said and I kissed him.

    He kissed me back his arms wrapping tightly around me. He stroked my cheek and his other hand ran through my hair.

    "I love you," I said wrapping my arms around his neck.

    "And I love you too," he said smiling.
     
  4. OMG!!!  I feel HORRIBLE about MacKenzie... 
     
  5. NOOOOOOO u should have taken Mackenzie
     
  6. Of course, the actual story is BRILLIANT! So please make more 
     
  7. Hahaha.... I kind of wish she stayed with Mackenzie... but some people would kill me if I did that! 
     
  8. Haha



    Bumpiest!!!!



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  9. Why does everyone want her to be with mackenzie??? They are brother and sister ewww lol  I LOVE RAFE
     
  10. Julia!! I know right!!!
     
  11. Haha


    Thts nasty



    If I had s sis I would never kiss her.
     
  12. Us did da end? I'm in the roof with my dad
     
  13. Hey it's someone a bit to old for u or someone you love even though your related to them
     
  14. It's pedo or incest no easy way out
     
  15. I'd choose the pedo... 