Something Missing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Aug 22, 2011.

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    This guy.... is so much cooler.... and hotter and I luv him!!! 
     
  2. They're cartoons
     
  3. So? They're hot! 
     
  4. UPDATEEE  MUAHHH
     
  5. I am your biggest fan  I looooooovvvvvveeeeee your stories  update please!! I'm dying here (jk. )
     
  6. Oh. My. God. 
    Update. Now.
     
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    Update please. This is amazing.
     
  8. I am going to post a pic of a super hot non-fiction guy(he's a real guy). But it's going to take a while. It's my first time and I have no idea how to use adobe photoshop 
     
  9. Ohhh!  lol
     
  10. I only sat there at the kitchen table. I had been sitting there for at least an hour. I had barely even sipped the tea Rafe had made me. He sat on the other side of the table and he frowned at me.

    "Hey, you alright?" he asked lighting a cigarette. He sighed when I didn't answer. "Alright. Never mind."

    "Pardon?" I asked.

    "Nothing," he said with another sigh. "Well I'm going to go out for a bit if you want to come along... on second thought I'm just going to go by myself, I'll be home soon," he said and he quickly kissed me before leaving.

    This was how I always imagined Mackenzie and I to be... a happy couple saying they would be home soon and kissing each other... but it wasn't like that between us. He died. I died. Rafe came along and now... Now I was just confused...

    "Damn it... Mackenzie..." I whispered.

    "Mackenzie?" asked Rafe.

    I turned to look at him. "I-it's nothing!" I said. "Never mind I don't want to talk about it!"

    "Are you having seconds thoughts because you still love him?" he asked.

    "What?! No! I said it's nothing!"

    "I don't believe that!" he said angrily. "What happened today?! You've been ignoring me and spaced out? What's wrong?! I need to know so I can help you!"

    "I-I..."

    "What happened?! Please..."

    "Mackenzie isn't dead!" I shouted. "He's not dead! HE'S NOT DEAD!!" I cried tears forming then streaming down my cheeks. "I saw him today..."

    "I'm sure it wasn't..."

    "It was him. He has a girlfriend... she told me his name... I had bumped into him this morning, at first I didn't think it was possible but... he's alive. And I don't know what to think," I said quietly.

    "Are you going to go back to him?"

    "Like I said... he has a girlfriend. Besides... I have you. I don't need anyone else," I said and I walked over to him and hugged him. "I-I love you and only you."

    "Okay," was all he said.

    I could tell he wasn't too persuaded at all. He wasn't too sure of what my future plans were.

    "Just... don't leave me," he said and he held me tight in his arms and kissed my lips. "Because I love you, Katherine."
     
  11. Awesomereally deep bro
     
  12. This is soo awesome. 
     
  13. Bump best story EVER
     
  14.  lol his name is Bidam 
     
  15. Bump this story is AWE-some! 